All Comments on 'Pencil Me In'

Very enjoyable, please write more and more of the same quality.

good one

I heard tell she (Cassandra Peterson, a.k.a. the Mistress of the Dark) lives(d) just down the road from you in the Springs.

Fun little bit of light revenge fantasy. Thanks

5*

Very funny, right from the title to the last full stop.

It showed imagination and humor, two of my favorite things. Well done. LW is not a good category for entering contests, but thanks for posting here.

Other than that — AWESOME!!!

5-stars & Favorite

Every element I love in this story!!!!!! 5 STARS

Tongue in cheek (for safety).........story eas awesome!

Ed

Story was good. You should have extend it a little bit more.

I'm anon because I haven't taken the time to start an account yet. I have read all of your work so far and you are one of my favorite authors here. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your stories with us.

Love any story that makes me laugh.

You are terrific and I really REALLY loved your story. The only thing I would have changed is to help HIM have the Cock that "pleased" whatever woman he was with.

she spun her tale of woe, but never once apologized to him. she disrespected him time and time again. never showed remorse. tried very hard to do damage control and lie to her husband when the cat was outta the bag. and YELLED at him a year later for 'all the sex she's missed out on'

that's not a victim. that's a schemer. she lacks the heart required to feel bad for others, and deserves the same apathy in kind.

Thanks for sharing!

Extremely well done at every level. This deserves a higher score. 5

She must have had twenty three legged cats. this needs a wee bit of punctuation, or she has twenty-three legged cats.

Too cute!!! Dang, I really enjoyed this one.

The ladies changing SHRINK was a nice touch. I'm surprised they didn't offer themselves to him -- after their divorces, of course!

and it was an easy read. Great job!

I really enjoyed reading this story. I am not sure how many other stories will be submitted but if they are any where near this good I am looking forward to reading them all. I gave this one 5 stars hell I am still laughing and smiling, great job.

love a good laugh, excellent

JJ

The chuck struck gold.

A sick and demented sense of humor is always a great way to spin a tale like this.

Enjoyed it a great deal. All those that needed it got their just punishment.

Keep up the great work.

Thanks

Thanks for this cute, funny little tale. Boogity, boogity, boogity indeed.... ;-)

Mmm Mmm Witchy Woman you got the moon in your eyes

I think this one is a winner for the contest. Nothing like a little Halloween humor for a good read . As always , I enjoy any revenge on the smirking lovers. I even looked up pencilitis in the urban dictionary. Who woulda thought it was real, almost. Really great story, as is your usual. Looking forward to more, son.

RR, thanks for another nod to my great school and state. I was just reading in our E newspaper about the chump change $750,000 A of A suit. We've had many, including an eight million and thirty million verdict. Woman have also had successful alienation lawsuits adjucated. Tarheels don't sell their spouses cheaply. There are also quite a few good old boys and girls who prefer a more personal payback for straying spouses. We get some good press about that too. Don't go messing round our back door.

That was a LOT of fun. Very likable main characters in the protagonist and Darla. Fun, a touch spooky and a very sweet ending. I hope it all works out for Darla too (so much so that I’d love to hear another story with her in it).

Honestly, one of the best entries in the Halloween genre I’ve read.

Thank you for sharing!!

Now this was really great! Haven't had such a good giggle in years. Really cleaver!

Thank you

Great writing. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

it would have been a 5 star for me if her cunt did permanently get glued shut. She got off easy for a cheater.

Great story! Gotta love shrinking the peckers of those fucking your wife. Five Stars!

Witchie Witchie cats ass, Happy HALLOWEEN! 🌇

5*

Nothing like reading a good story and getting a smile with your morning cup of coffee. I enjoy reading a story with a humor twist. Thanks for sharing.

Wouldn't have bothered me if the cheaters might have had their members restored to a pain free but modest size. Happy Halloween to all!

Surely no one will dare to call this over the top or unreal. Actually it seems to be a fine example of a macho fantasy. The key moment was when he asked for his Darla back, all three hundred pounds.

Great Plot. Well executed.

Nice touch

Well written and done. Seriously funny. Where does this Darla live?

A nicer Treat to read such a clever tale! Thanks for the story!

"Buckeye Fan"

Great story. Very entertaining.

Really enjoyable

Creative and Fun. Keep writing.

T.T.

Can he put the pencilitis curse on Swinger Joe. 😝

Finally got around to reading this one,I liked it. Now that is an original. I would never have thought of that, good job. It gave me some laughs. 5*+

And you managed to work Elvira into it! That was really funny. I can just imagine a small Elvira playing with a room full of three legged cats.

5* for creativity alone. You, sir, have a wonderfully delightful imagination!

Seriously wicked!!!

Brilliant and fun! Thank you.

That was a really fun story. Nothing like a BTB with a little humor.

One of the best Halloween stories I've read here. I love the curses and the power of suggestion. I need to call on Darla.

My God I loved this story!!! Keep up the great writing!

Really liked the ending on this one, your endings seem to be unique in that they really are unique, very good.

5 stars

Of course stories not framed by reality

are easier to write than others.

This was though well written

and with a delightful humor.

Top ratings from me.

or a gift from the beyond, of which I do believe. TK U MLJ LV NV

Really good tale.

So is Darlene related to him in that he had sex with darla and she quick grew her daughter ? That would put this tale in the incest category :)

Read it for 2nd time and upgraded it from 4 to 5 stars. A great halloween tale.

If only this could happen in real life.

Loved this story. Every time I go golf I'll get a chuckle.

Very different, very funny.

Fun to read this one. If you believe hard enough, maybe it happens. That’s what Walt always said.

that Darla, as she said, was edging into trouble, and that Darla became Darlene???

Really funny.

...Darla, and Darlene are?

"It was bad enough that they'd turned me into a cuck." - Not a cuck, YET, just a cuckold, unless you go along with it, THEN you'll be a cuck.

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@Anonymous Re: Memory - Just a little suspension of disbelief needed there, no bog deal.

very creative and well executed 5

I expected that Darla became Darlene, and bewitched herself to start a new life, but having her old visage pop up at the wedding doesn't fit at all.

And if Darla isn't Darlene, why would she play matchmaker if she has feelings for him.

It just feels too vague and like a plot hole.

More on these please

I loved this! How did I miss it?

Bridgette was even more of a bitch than a witch....

LOVE IT! A great read. Thank you

very entertaining. RCD

Great story Loved it A pleasure to read

Funny story. Good job.

What a great story. Easy 5 stars

In the same way that watching supermodels play topless beach volleyball is mildly entertaining.

Fun story

Good story.

Lovely story, what goes around......................I love your picture of the American Gold Finch. I feed the birds on my deck and I have had as many as six Gold Finches feeding at one time. They do get territorial at times and chase other Gold Finches off. They are fun to watch. Your doing good, keep writing.

L M A O !!! good fun.

Channeling PapaToad!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

lulz, nice story and a funny revenge!

Humor

Second read first was a year ago. story still a 5+

RCD

Brilliant! Lol. You have quite an imagination. Thank you for sharing it. Please continue your great work.

G

Laughed out loud at the pencil and eraser bit! Great work. Thanks for writing.

Nice humorous piece. Fun to read and justice was served.

A fun story, sort of si fi , not the thing I read very often

Funny and creative story. Entertaining!

Funny and enjoyable

A modern day Grimm story.

Loved it! Nice break from the usual LW stories.

This was a completely wacked out story and I LOVED IT!!!!

Love the Darla character! Great Halloween story.

Fun but silly

My second time around for this fun story. You shall reap what you sow. Sooner or later Karma balances things out. A very humorous piece of work, had a smile on my face most of the way thru. The payoff in the end was also great, sort of like the princess kissing the frog..........................

Absolutely ridiculous and wonderfully fun made me smile and cross my legs a few times it's been told though for everyone who gives it 5 stars their dick grows, so it is the perfect size in everyone they are with.

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Fun und Funny!

11/10!!!!!

Hilarious and very entertaining. Lol.

I need a Darla.

Loved it! Different!