All Comments on 'Penny & Ryan Pt. 01'

Hurry with the next chapter.

I am so hard just thinking about fucking and sucking as I watch.

Wish I was there.

just take your time and really flesh out your characters more before just diving right in to the sex part. you show some promise as a writer and will get better the more you write if you're willing to work at it more. best of luck to you, will be watching.

very hot story...I agree that any time waiting for the sequel will be too long !! keep up the good work

So good for a shorter story. Please don't make us wait to long for part 2.

Keep up the good work, great build up !! I hate it when you forget that the next story is not done yet !! Don't keep us waiting.

Really?

I like the introduction. Always a favourite scenario, lots of play. Looking forward to the really exciting part where he gets to watch girl on girl

Loved this story!

Looking forward to how this will play out. Well written and paced, please give os the second instalment soon.

Thank you all for following me, adding my story to your favorites, the feedback, and all the positive comments! Parts -2 and -3 are submitted, and in the hands of the Literotica reviewers. I'm working on Part-4.

Love, Casey!

So far so good... I can't wait...

So sucking fucking hot. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Clever premise.

Decent buildup.

Sex a bit rushed.

Could have uses some slow masturbating of each other while watching the porn video. With dialog about what each was doing -- and feeling. And, other than the girl-on-girl in the video, some conversation about how good that must feel, and should we try it?

An editor/proofreader would help. You wrote THOUGH when you meant THOUGHT. And you wrote HE when you meant HER.

Four stars.

Very hot premise of step-siblings plotting to seduce one of their GFs. Will look forward to reading how Penny finally gets her tongue inside Suzy’s hot pussy

Great beginning. Looking forward to where this story goes.

Great introduction into what I'm sure will be a blockbuster!