by funkyjunkymunkey
Please quit the ".... It is distracting to the reader.
continue this story........
please continue your story,SOON.
nice introduction , bring on part 2 soon
Where's part 2?
Awesome!! I hope that part 2 shows up soon and more lengthy stories too. I appreciate your devotion to entertain people over the world.
Please continue...Seems very Promising....
please continue
Please do more of the story starting out good keep going
Wow i really love the way of your writing.. Voice of words..