All Comments on 'Penpals Become Lovers Pt. 02'

by HampshireBoy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Some continuity errors here.

Is her name Jane, or is it Mary (from the first chapter)? Otherwise, it's not a bad read. Could be hotter, but a decent little quickie.

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