All Comments on 'Penthouse Dungeon'

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FantazmasterFantazmasterover 13 years ago
Very Intense!

This story is unique as the author is able to paint with words, the ambiance of this well appointed penthouse dungeon.In particular I was intrigued by the attention the author payed to the element of light as it came into play forming an exceptional palette against which the action takes place.

The description of Morgaine,the female submissive in this story,was very easy for me to envision,given the author's ability to paint with words,a vivid "mind picture" of this female submissive.

Later in the story the author explores the topic of "sub space" and the effects thereof on this well described submissive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Gorgeous!

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