People Can Change Ch. 01

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I had already diverted my mail to Clare's house and the weekend brought me more bad news. Social services had decided my access to the children would be limited to two hours a week and that had to be supervised. The second item of bad news was that the Child Support Agency expected me to pay one hundred and thirty pounds a week, per child. I can only take one thousand pounds out of the company per month and now the CSA want one thousand and forty. It seemed like my world was collapsing around me.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Pathos. (Haste makes Waste?)

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineabout 2 months ago

One thought comes to mind. In court, Julie’s sister bared her ankle to show the tattoo matched the one in the video. The judge should have made sure that Julie didn’t have an identical tattoo.

mariverzmariverz6 months ago

entiendo, entonces tenia una gemela de la que el esposo no sabia nada....entiendo....

p,d. jaajjajajajaajajaajjajajaajaa

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

What stupid fucking characters in this story, right from the interfering neighbors to the incompetent bitch Claire!!

ANOTHER TRASH PIECE OF WRITING FROM CUCK KEN

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Someone should tell the slut lying to thw court is criminal and why would the sister lie to cover for her. Ahe does not love never did

Alvares1414Alvares141412 months ago

This entire premise is flawed. He throws her out. And that's GBH?

What the fuck? 1*

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This doesn't make sense. Her injuries are significantly more than his actions would have caused. How did that happen?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Bullshit. He wouldn’t get arrested for throwing her out

BAnde53507BAnde53507over 1 year ago

“I had been a sergeant in the Royal Marines and for seven years my men had relied on me for decisive leadership.” It doesn’t appear so in this case. I would expect a character with this mans background would take smarter actions. First and foremost: do no harm to yourself. Not so wise as described.

dawg997dawg997almost 2 years ago

Why did the wife hide the fact she had a twin sister? No excuse to do what he did before he confronted her first. But the writing is easy to read and the story flows well.

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanalmost 2 years ago

sister ummm yaaaa ok we will see

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

jesus this is depressing as fuck

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2over 2 years ago

The core premise is BS. To have an identical sister that is hidden from the husband for years, who is made up exactly like the wife at the time of their wedding. Black sheep or not, do have never told her husband about her identical twin sister is absurd.

Then to have her secretly feed money into his company. This is just a f-cked up marriage and frankly f-cked up marriage. Based on lies and secrets from the git-go

AlericAlericover 3 years ago
Just No

You expect me to buy the twin sister looked exactly like his wife down to makeup and hairstyle when they had been estranged for years, and that she had never mentioned her to her husband? To much coincidence. He was either set up from the start, or her actions(or lack thereof) are a contributing factor. Sorry, but I don't buy your premise, because if she was a good partner like you say, she would have told him about her sister, and all the things that she'd done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PLOT HOLE?

What was a problem for a number of commenters, did not occur to me at all as I read. Julie had a black-sheep sister with whom she had only sporadic contact, such as when Julie footed the bill for rehab, but she held Caroline at armslength -- actually further, as Julie eventually required one hundred miles separation plus no contact except through a PO box. That Julie would be ashamed of her, never bringing her up to friends or her husband -- I did not sense any incongruity -- it simply went right past me without registering.

HOWEVER, what did register in a big way, was in the fourth paragraph, when he is comparing the Gang Banged Wives video with family photo albums, finding a picture with "same hairstyle, make up [should be makeup] done the same way" from their honeymoon.

If she is keeping black-sheep Caroline at "armslength" and secret from friends and new hubby (which obviously means not at the wedding), how do these at-a-distance and at-odds sisters have the same hairstyle and (especially) even the same makeup (wouldn't one be garish and the other subdued?)?

My mind is still hung up on this incongruous "plot hole."

Will it be explained/reconciled in the following chapters?

(The unknown/hidden sister still does not bother me, even after reading the comments).

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A grab-your-attention plot.

Paul in Oklahoma

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