All Comments on 'Pepper's Present'

Way too many names and relationships with one another introduced in the opening paragraphs. Way, way, way too confusing. I stopped reading as you just kept adding names, especially when you added the name of a young child. This is an adult erotic fiction site and no children should be included as characters. Sick.

I enjoyed the story and would like to see the character continue. I agree there were a lot of unnecessary names, but the kids names did show a little Teresa is a Mom with a life that is being taken over a bit. 4 stars

Very explicit and graphic. Well written. I agree with the comment that there were too many names and information before the "scene" started.

I had only momentary confusion with where you were going with the names. I believe iit was necessary to set up the story, tho, so no real problem. Young Ms. Rodgers is going to be a force to be reckoned with!