by mojavejoe420
I wanted Jim to end up with Mel, but otherwise it was great and hot! Well done!
I almost snorted coffee out my nose with the CarTalk lawyer reference!! Love it. Keep up the good work.
Sorry, part 3 was a complete let down and contrary to the other part's build up.
"I love you, Jim"..."I love you, too, Mel" all bull, bunch of crap.
Definitely needs another chapter, seems like pore Jim could be left hanging on his own in the end.