All Comments on 'Perchance To Dream Pt. 04'

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Anonymousabout 7 years ago

A much nicer end than the last chapter.

Rancher46 over 3 years ago

What a wonderful love story, it was great that Mel and Jim got together and that Alice found a new guy that let her dad and Mel have that happily ever after. The ending indicated a happily ever after, but a marriage between Jim and Mel would have been great. 5 stars

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