All Comments on 'Perfect'

And of course it will.

... but I can find very little in this story that is erotic and I can only see starving someone - or permitting them to starve themselves - as being cruel for its own sake and decidedly a TURN-OFF. As the other comment mentions, this kind of behaviour WILL lead to her death, and a most unpleasant one. Your writing deserves a better show-case than this.

I am sorry to say I do not feel I can award this story any stars whatever, but I shall not hide behind the parapet of anonymity - I stand by what I have said.

As a slave I find this work really really bad. this has so many red flags it's depressing. this is not bdsm. this is abuse. verbal abuse, mental abuse, emotional abuse, and physical abuse. if i or any of my friends were treated like this i would get her help and have my Sir kick this supposedly dom ass. i really hate you marked this ass bdsm

My stories are extreme and likely not to the tastes of most readers. I use my fiction to explore my deepest, most twisted thoughts, fetishes, and urges. My most extreme stories concern activities that I consider arousing but would never engage in. If you find my stories offensive, just remember that they exist purely in the realm of fantasy and are not intended to depict healthy, responsible S/m or P/e relationships.

to the naysayers. Most of these lit fanatics also trash 'Shades of Grey'. Well, we all want to to know when the haters sell their work for a half a billion dollars -- and that doesn't include book sales..

I wish them good luck on that. Most likely -- just not gonna happen. But far be it from me to trash their dreams.

In the meantime...u keep on truckin'...

Excellent study of a character who despises herself.

I liked it, it turned me on

This theme really intrigues me.. A beauty and a beast.