All Comments on 'Perfect Imperfections Ch. 06'

I don't have any problem following your story. I like the way you are telling it: flashbacks, time jumps, changing POV.

I'm looking forward to reading how it's going to play out. The heart break and emotions are very well captured. I also love the way you describe landscapes and situations.

I get that you're telling the story out of order, in flash backs. It isn't perfect and maybe hard to follow but I still think it's a very good story.

I can't believe Brandon would do this to Alec after four years.. Can't wait for an update. This was a very good and informative chapter..

The story is okey but its everywhere and hard to follow. This chapter makes sence than all the rest combined. Keep up we learn thru mistakes.