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All Comments on 'Perfect Lookalikes Inc. - Cheryl'

by GiddyDreamer

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Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
More please

So do we now adjourn to home where they live together as a couple and we can experience some real lovemaking between them?

GiddyDreamerGiddyDreamerabout 6 years agoAuthor
I think I put this in the wrong category.

Thanks, Turtle. I'm glad you liked it but I feel my story did not resonate with readers. It offers brother-sister love all right but maybe I put in too much science fiction and fantasy for some, even though the time the story takes place is mostly from the 1990s to the 2020s. There was a bit of back and forth time-wise at the beginning and I probably handled that poorly and readers did not read on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
good

its good that this story has a happy ending

but I think u can elaborate the story & make it big

but now doesn't matter try a long story for sister lover

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Sexual tension and giddy sensuality are what I always look for in erotica and I try to reproduce those emotions in my stories. After three years here, however, I have few illusions on my talent as a writer. Some readers do not care for my particular way of writing and I unders...