All Comments on 'Perfect Patty's Revenge'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
good, but...

The story was good, but the ending was a bit weak.

-- KVK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
great

Nice Like the way she didnt tell in the end

hammer17hammer17about 17 years ago
Yes!

Great story, now how about either another chapter or a sequel..

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
dayum

that was amazing! you should make part 2!

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