Perfection

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"Elena, you asked what I'd do. Seriously, for now, I want to take this one day at a time, to get to know you better, to love you more, and when the time comes, if all goes as I hope, I want to love you forever."

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Valentine's Day, one year later

With so many people and so many varying expectations, there may be no true perfection in the world. We seek perfection, but knowing that we'll never achieve it in ourselves or find it in others, we usually have to settle for something and hope that it's close enough.

Yes, I know I'm not perfect and Elena knows it. Maybe she really isn't perfect either...with my rose-colored glasses, I'm not certain but I know she's close enough for me. Hogan finally realized it with Lisa too; after some ups and downs between them, Elena and I attended their wedding a couple of weeks ago.

I reach in my front pocket and feel the little box resting in the change pocket. When I pull it out in a little while and ask her to be my wife, I hope she'll feel that I'm close enough for her too.

The End

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End Note:

Thanks to everyone for reading, voting, favoriting, following, and/or commenting. Your support is appreciated.

The idea for the story was sparked by reading about the retirement of an adult model some years ago. This happens every day, with women doing a single modeling session or two and then moving on, but big stars with hundreds of sessions or videos sometimes retire when they find what they want in life or maybe just get too sick of the business. The idea that Dan would run into the particular woman of his dreams may be farfetched but strange things happen sometime...especially in fiction!

The boombox scene that Dan attempts to emulate in the story was from the movie "Say Anything" starring John Cusack and Ione Skye in 1989. While the movie was a minor hit bringing in about $21.5 million in box office revenue worldwide), it's become something of a cult classic since then and Filmsite.org considers the "BoomBox Serenade" as one of the 100 most iconic and recognizable scenes in movie history.

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JimDiamondJimDiamond3 months ago

This was a great story. Way better than than April Fools Day one, I just read!

kaotic2kaotic24 months ago

This was lovely. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So nice! Thank you. 5 stars

TexMan1970TexMan19708 months ago

Great story! And thanks for the notes about the movie "Say Anything" I saw that movie and loved it! Keep up the good work, you tell great stories.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The author takes characters that are hard to imagine as real people and makes us fall in love with them as if they were real people. It is an amazing talent. Thanks so much.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Was the woman perfect? Was the story perfect?

I was privileged to be married to the perfect woman (for me) and so I believe the characters were the perfect fit for each other.

Southern Crossfire is an author I enjoy immensely.

5 for me, at least.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"Perfection " is PERFECT! 5 Stars. Thank you for sharing.

G

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

5* That means excellent plot, characters developed and sympathetic and that extra something that makes a great Romance.

Call this a must read!

The Hoary Cleric

KenfromIndyKenfromIndyover 1 year ago

Excellent reading, entertaining and humorous. Thank you for the boom box writing, got a good laugh from me. Glad you mentioned the name because I was going to have to look and didn’t recall Ione Skye. All good enjoyment was achieved. 5 stars

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

dgfergiedgfergieover 1 year ago

Not much to say, a nice romantic love story with a little bump or two in the road. Good writing and believable.

Not quite enough bring a tear to my eye but good. 5 stars

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