All Comments on 'Perfection Ch. 01'

This is a great start, don't leave us hanging like this!!!

I liked the story and hope you decide to continue it. You have some good characters to work with and the possibilities abound. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Loved the start, loved the character interactions! More please!

Currently working on chapter 2, stay tuned!

You have a good start to a seemingly good story. One with some sex, rather than the usual found here, sex without a story. Let's read some more please.

I liked it! It was tender and sweet. I love it when the underdog comes out on top! I'm glad that you have continued it into a series. 5/5