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All Comments on 'Permini - Ch. 03: The Control'

by Neradark

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

'the closed door's knob' - please consider the knob of the closed door. Rationale : a door is not capable of ownership.

My major question is: How quickly, and how many erotica writers will pick up on 'permini?' I haven't come across this adaptation for errotic literature but donly think you have something here. Congratulations.

Obviously a fun read.

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