All Comments on 'Persistence Pays Off'

5 stars for this. I would really like to read the next chapter about what happens at the nudist resort

I love incest romance this was great. I was assuming that she was about 38 and he was 21 and had him early in life. This was a fantastic story either way. Thanks for the read and please continue.

Good story, would have been a lot better however, if the implied seduction of the mother had been included.

As it is, it feels as though there was a missing chapter!

Easy to read and very sexy. Waiting for part two and the honey moon.

And I'd love to read more.

i relate to this very well but mom and i never thought about havingkids she took pills all along

Fan............tastic!!!!! Good pace; well written and sensual.

Totally lacking in any kind of structure.

More importantly, where was the "A son seduces and marries his mother." bit?

Or do think that it is OK for a mother to get a casual propoasal of marriage from her son and agree to it?

Such a waste of time.

Peter's been having a great time sticking his young prick up between his mother's legs. Now he's fucked a baby up her cunt and the time has come for him to make his mother an honest woman. To marry her. That way Peter has not only the natural right but the legal right to shove his fat prick up his mother's mommy-hole any time he feels the slightest urge. He'll have his young dick up his mother's cunt more than it's just hanging between his legs. His prick'll nudge his little sleeping brother or sister, kind of just to say hello. And when the boy unloads his young balls up his mommy's coochie, his little sibling'll get a good thorough washing with his creamy semen, like a blessing.

This is a beautiful story. I find it romantic and erotic. I would love to read more.

Thank you.

i agree - romantic and sexy. well written

but she is way too old. very unlikely to get prego or carry it to a birth. A VERY UNREALISTIC STORY 4 stars. But a fun one.