All Comments on 'Perspective'

beautiful!

Lovely, actually. The shifting in perspective was a bit jarring, but being labeled so well, it was quite acceptable. Nice work.

-- KK in Texas

Your story is so well written, that when I came to the end, I wasn't ready for it to end. I wanted to know what is going to happen in the lives of the older woman and younger man. Thank You for the very beautiful story......Rich

Your stories/writings are up there with the best of them. The sexual aspect is very well written but the emotion and deep feelings that you evoke in them is just the best feeling in the world. Thankyou so much for your gift....

lost the plot on this one apart from it involving two men and two women who are related...but as they say....vice is nice but incest is best....

as it kept swapping back and forth which made it dis-jointed....much prefer the straight story

I wished that it would have been brought to a fulfilling ending!

I don't score unfinished stories.