by LateStageInfernalism
Damn. Your work is astounding but this takes it to a whole other level. Damn. 10/10 WILL read again.
Thanks for writing this story!
It is one that has been missing from my list of daddy/daughter stories I've wanted to read, the premise, of course!
Overall amazing writing, love the character build-up, wish I could have know how his kids reacted to her as his girlfriend (of course not knowing she was their sister) and to know for sure that they would or did have a child in the future, but I'm not even complaining because I really enjoyed reading this so much.
I'm definitely adding this to my list of top daddy/daughter stories I've read.
Infinitely better than the "Book Club" series that you have started. I never understood the 'use and being used' thing. I appreciate this little taste and explanation of it.
The level of emotion you can bring to a story is why you were one of the ones who inspired me to finally write my own story. To this day 'Athena's Dance' is still one of my all time favorites
Forever a fan
Jack
I don't know how I should feel about This I can't say I love it, but it deserves five stars for its originality alone but the subject is too painful for love. Your creativity is not in doubt. Your construction of the story is right. It leaves me feeling sorry.
Loved it. A bit short for one of your stories, but still excellent.
The only thing that felt out of place was when he briefly considers murder. It didn’t feel like a natural aspect of his character and the paragraph leading up to it didn’t really paint an alarming enough picture to justify the instinct - at least, to my mind.
Generally I like your stories. But to be honest, your recent ones aren't as good as before. Maybe it' just me, I feel that the plots are not as intriguing as before.
Cannot express how much I enjoyed this audio. 1. I don't have the vocabulary and 2. I couldn't do it justice if I did. From the script to the performance. Just WOW! I'm in awe of the talent and effort that goes into these. Thank you.
Another fantastic story. Thanks for the audio version. It's the first time I listen to one on this site. ☺Anonymous Girl
Amazing and thank your for sharing the story, as well as going the extra mile to have it be voice acted and well at that. Very enjoyable.
Your works are just the best! The audio also has great quality narration. Hope there's more audio versions of your work.
Wow. Just, wow. A very good read, and an even better listen. I'm not a weirdo, exactly, and I couldn't jack off to completion here, but it made me intensely aroused and I had to listen to it to completion. And now that it's done, I must say, an excellent piece.
I find myself constantly coming back to this. It is so well put together and the narrators are fantastic. I really hope more work like this can follow!
Great story , perfectly executed.
Top notch editing and high heat !
Cheers and looking forward to more
Wow awesome story y’all should do more like this. I’d give it a ten if i could rate it that high. Awesome stoy