by Over Stimulated
Great story - well paced, slow build up of atmosphere, good structure, oh, and very exciting. Don't keep us waiting too long for more.
Hard to improve over part 1, but you managed to do it. Hope there are more parts to this sweet little story.
Loved the story and the skillful way it was told. i could feel the excitment and confusion the author was experiencing. Hot topic. Too bad the author did not thak the Dr. for the treatment he provided his fiance. Otherwise it was excellent.
i love these stoires, i can't get enough.
please write a whole lot more <3.
The psychotic hubris of claiming to not want to harm some one you drug and set up for rape.
That this is so well written makes it frightening and not erotic.
It's so wrong to love this story so much... but I do. So well written.
damn I must be a sick bastard. Can't wait to read the rest of it. Sooo erotic
I'm loving these stories so far. An unexpected turn on turns into an obsession, which turns into reality. The sex is well written and not over too quickly. The buildup, tension, anticipation, and mild anxiety over being caught are very well written and only add to the excitement. Two chapters and two very powerful orgasms. I can't wait to see what else he puts her through unknowingly.
I agree with others - the story is so well written, it's compelling to read. What is wrong with me???
Only four stars this episode. Just as well written as the first one, but the storyline was basically a repeat of the first part.
Very hot store I am hooked cant wait to read the next chapter and see what is next for Denise!