All Comments on 'Perversions and Transgressions Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
so hot love it

so hot love it more more

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great

Great story - well paced, slow build up of atmosphere, good structure, oh, and very exciting. Don't keep us waiting too long for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
REAL HOT

GR8 STORY - WAITING FOR MORE UPDATES ON THIS STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hoping for more

Hard to improve over part 1, but you managed to do it. Hope there are more parts to this sweet little story.

doctoryes48doctoryes48almost 16 years ago
Very hot

Loved the story and the skillful way it was told. i could feel the excitment and confusion the author was experiencing. Hot topic. Too bad the author did not thak the Dr. for the treatment he provided his fiance. Otherwise it was excellent.

lustyemlustyemover 13 years ago
I liked the story

I liked the story thankyou.

shezw00shezw00over 12 years ago
all of your stoires are the best!

i love these stoires, i can't get enough.

please write a whole lot more <3.

CoolBreeezCoolBreeezover 11 years ago
Absolutely Incredible Story!

A Work of Erotic Art!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

The psychotic hubris of claiming to not want to harm some one you drug and set up for rape.

That this is so well written makes it frightening and not erotic.

grrlslavegrrlslaveabout 10 years ago
Guilty pleasure

It's so wrong to love this story so much... but I do. So well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

damn I must be a sick bastard. Can't wait to read the rest of it. Sooo erotic

Akirababe87Akirababe87almost 4 years ago
Yes!

I'm loving these stories so far. An unexpected turn on turns into an obsession, which turns into reality. The sex is well written and not over too quickly. The buildup, tension, anticipation, and mild anxiety over being caught are very well written and only add to the excitement. Two chapters and two very powerful orgasms. I can't wait to see what else he puts her through unknowingly.

slow_and_steadyslow_and_steadyalmost 2 years ago

I agree with others - the story is so well written, it's compelling to read. What is wrong with me???

UncleGrahamUncleGrahamover 1 year ago

Only four stars this episode. Just as well written as the first one, but the storyline was basically a repeat of the first part.

Terri19Terri196 months ago

Very hot store I am hooked cant wait to read the next chapter and see what is next for Denise!

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