All Comments on 'Perversions and Transgressions'

This is a great story for a true Voyeur. I myself would want to be wide awake for the festivities but to watch something like this would be a great turn on.

Having been taken in my sleep before, I particularly enjoyed this story (although my circumstances were not as interesting!). I'll be watching out for future installments... And sleeping with one eye open...

Stories such as these are such a special turn on with a twist to are there any where you invite men to fuck her while you watch. Please let us hear from you again

Well written story. Good detail as we could watch over your shoulder as your friend took advantage of this passed out blonde babe who was non the wiser in the morning. Looking forward to reading about how, having learned you enjoy this fetish of taking advantage of passed out babes, how you set up future conquests.

Great. More of what happens to her please.

Looking forward to more of this series.

One of the best! Very descriptive while building tension and excitement. It's very rare that a story about a man watching his woman (wife or girlfriend) be taken by another guy yet he doesn't come off as a wimp for enjoying it. He gets pleasure from watching her as he can't when he is with her. Truly one of a kind and a good example to follow if you are looking to write erotic stories and want to learn how. This story is how you do it! Congrats to the author on an A+ story!

OMG... i love this story. Please, write more. i get so hot from Your stories (yep i read Chapter 2 too!) :oÞ

THIS IS THE MOST EROTIC THING ON WEB

Please add more stories. I can see that you have stopped writing. This is the most creative stuff on this website. Reminds me of notes from underground by fyodor dostoyevsky. But really man, this story is so awesome. All it needs is more creativity and lots of more fucking. Thanks

Just a cheap rape story with a passed out girl.

A Work of Erotic Art!

If there is more to this story I would love to read it!

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concrats, well written and tempting. Probably I'd have added a note that he is about to spicy her drinks now on regular base to feed his fetish.

I really enjoy these stories where men get turned on by watching their girlfriends/wives get taken. This story and the rest of the series by this author are among the best written on this theme. Thanks for the fantasy!

First I’d like to thank you for writing this story. My critique is this. It’s too long. You laid out the story nicely up until after the rapist checked on the boyfriend. I get it you were going for slow burn but it began to put me to sleep. I suggest looking at what isn’t needed in the story and remove those parts. I believe you have a wonderful tale here just long winded . Jj

I know where you are coming from I'm on the same voyage

Best story I have ever read. It was written from the heart. Hope to read more of your stories.

Very exciting i love it I would love to be her and awake wet and sticky between the legs! Knowing i was used how ever he choose knowing I loved it all. I look forward to reading the other chapters in this series .