All Comments on '"Pet Mommy": Fucking with Mommy-Slut'

As the story is currently progressing, I see three possibilities. First, Michael loses control to his sister, leaving him dominating his mother but submissive to his sister. Second, he gains control of his sister, possibly through hidden files on her computer or other compromising information. Third, he and his sister have been working together the whole time. Of course, I am reminded of a character in a series of novels who is described as, when he approaches a fork in the road, he would be just as likely to take to the trees or dig a hole as to take either path. Surprise us!

I was so into this thread right up until crystal roll reversed. Bah. I want to punish Jasmine!! To bad i can't come off anon.

Other than that little turn around I really like the series. I don't like Crystal being Mommy's domme, when they get home Michael needs to break her and so that she becomes the bitch to both him and Betty.

I definitely want Michael to end up domming Crystal. I didn't enjoy the twist quite as much, although I didn't mind her starting to figure out what was happening. The switch was a little too quick. She's only a psychology major, not a full blown psychologist. lol I like the idea of her being thrown off her supposed intellectual game and realizing that for once she is, in fact, actually not in control. You tell a great tale, however. Keep up the good work!

Please please please tell me the story continues!!!!!!!!

This prissy little teen needs to learn her place! Michael is the man of the house and she needs to learn to respect his rules. I don't like that crystal became the Dom but I can live with it. If she dominates Michael my heart would just break. Girls like her need to be knocked down a peg.

The twist turning crystal dom to mommyslut was good. Now you just need to have her become sub to cock while maintaing dom to cunt! Thus allowing michael to maintain his dom stature to mommyslut and gain crystal as sub. Graduation should be interesting way to tie them together

I think that Michael and Crystal, upon realizing they are both dominant over their mommy, propose a contest to win dominance in the household. Whoever can make their Mom cum the most, or do the most depraved thing, wins dominance of their mommy, and the loser will also be submissive to the winner.

It's a Slut off.

Well first of I adore this series. Second, the twist was nice, but i would have preferred her be a dom over Crystal. I just love the idea of a sub to cock, but dom to cunt! Anyway Michael should definitely have Crystal as a pet. Girls like her need to be knocked down a peg or two. ALSO KEEP WRITING!!

Thanks to al you commented. Part four is finally done and will be out in a few days...

..... Entire hot tale! Wow! The only thing that went untouched (pun intended) is Michael eating cock and getting done the hard way!

Michael disclosing his love of wearing panties and thigh highs, too!

Love the twist with the mom's plans backfiring on her.

Maybe Michael becomes her slave now? Any way you take it will be good. Loving it so far. liked the toe sucking too.

Awesome writing, and story telling!! Great detail and insight to the characters!! Excellent job to all who made this happen.

I didnt imagine i would be so turned on by mom/daughter incest considering i've been so focused on mother/son. I skipped so many such stories not realizing how enticing it would be. :)

I can almost feel that 'burning' need of sexual explosion such as her mom often does. Im off to the next chapter, I hope its there in your list. If not..... then I will have to make you my Author Pet :) lol...... hope youre smiling! :)

Kudos to you

I would love to read about a power struggle between the son and daughter.

This story got so naughty having the daughter turning the table on her Mother. I loved it!

You should 1 have the son come to the bar and change the tide once more

2 have them go home and have the son sexually take the daughter over.

truly tells you that your readers are paying attention and are really on your side. All I can say is WOW

I agree that you should have them go home and then have the son take the daughter over as well I think the dynamic works with him being the one in charge especially with him being the youngest it adds just a little more flair to it

I think that when they get home they get caught by Master and he gets control over Sister some how and play with Mommy inbetween before the final domination of sister and setup house the three of them

I agree with the others Micheal should be top of the kink chain as it wear and Hannah should be made to be at the bottom for trying to dom mom

Michael should get something off her computer to gain the upper hand and punish her for wat happen to mom

I dont usually read lesbian stories but I definitely will if they are like yours: incest and dom/sub. With that being said, it was a very hot story. I was excited for the mother to have her own pet and teach her wild child daughter a lesson. And although the twist of the daughter catching on and turning the tables was absolutely exciting, I am sad it wasnt the other way around. I hope the mother is able to dom her daughter eventually.

Id like to see Crystal take over and steal Mommy from Michael , and she Crystal makes michael her pet but refuses to fuck him and only lets him fuck mommy when she doesnt want her for herself , so michael becomes second in command over mommy

interesting plot twist.

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I love the twist at the end!

Great story, great writing! Suggestion for next chapter? The two kids competing for who gets ownership of mummy, The loser submitting to the other, and joining mummy-slut as a sub...

What a delightful change and surprising just as well,awesome.

I think you have mommy and daughter playing and the son walk in taking control... but then you are the writer. Great story!

Incredibly hot. And I'm a male submissive. I loved it.

Thank you.

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Always a problem when you let the plot drive the pen. A good read so far though. You will need to get Michael involved. Have him come upon them when Mommy is eating cunt or Crystal catching Mommy maybe fucking Fred while blowing Michael. You’ve got to create a clash of wills between the kids and Michael cumin out on top. Preferably on top of Crystal, with his cock in her arse.

First, you're a fantastic writer. Here's a possible way out of the corner: On the drive home from the lesbian club Crystal forces Mommy to tell her all about the sexual relationship Mom eluded to earlier in the day. In doing so, Mom tells all. Not just about her and Michael, but also about Michael's plan to make his sister submit, ultimately to his rules of the family. Crystal quickly devises a plan to turn the tables on him, making the new family hierarchy Crystal, Mommy, and then now cleanup boy Michael.

This is totally amazing. I don't read your text I actually sucking in every word. This is so amazing story. Full of life and hot erotic sex. You are just a splendid writer. I have read so far every story you have written and more are yet to come. I´m happy. Your stories are so interesting that its hard to stop and do something else for a while. Keep up the good work.

Just wish you would have continued the mother as the dom and the daughter as the sub. It really could write itself if that plot would have continued. IMHO...

thanks for the story, I love the subject!!!

Michael must be in full control. It's his story. Mommy tells him what happened at the club and then he takes over Crystal and fully dominates her.

Subsequently, to prove he is in charge, he makes both Mommy and Crystal perform together for him, using a variety of toys.

Then he fucks Mommy while she eats Crystal. Then he fucks Crystal while she uses a strap on on Mommy.

All this is to show that he is the one with ultimate control, and that they have no choice but to comply with EVERY demand he makes of them, no matter how how crude or perverse his demands might be.

He uses the internet to gain information on how to further humiliate them, which leads to bondage and S&M.

When he wants an additional fucktoy, he gets Mommy to invite Grandma to visit and then adds her to his list of available women that he can use in any way that he wants.

And I just lost interest. If I want a twist like that, I'll subject myself to a GoT's episode.

Not what I wanted, killed it stone dead

Look, to me honestly, that twist made it so much more interesting. Really enjoyed it.

Not sure why people are being rude, you spent your free time didn’t get paid for writing the story and people are complying.

I think it was good keep on writing

143 comments. B-jesis thats huge. But i can understand why: its completely captivating. I dont normally seek out saphic lit, but thus chap was hot with barely any sex acts. Thats something a great writer can accomplish.

BTW: Never mind the haters, they should've know early in 1st chap this twist was inevitable. I think the haters have a case of morbid facination anyway

oh my god it just keeps getting better all the time

This is a very interesting series. Mother is a true submissive without reservation. As an avid reader od son/mother incest stories, I would have like more Indepth character development. This is without question a 5-star series, so far.

You stories, particularly this one, are so sexual without always including much sex. It is hard to stop reading because one wants (needs) to see what comes (cums) next. Visually imagining a woman between the legs of another and licking is about the hottest image possible. Can’t wait for the next installment.

uff what a rich lesbian incest I adore it

This series is amazing, I was surprised to see pet mommy dominated by her daughter thought it was going to go the other way. But I guess she’s just too submissive super hot can’t wait for the others