All Comments on '"Pet Mommy": Fucking with Mommy-Slut'

This series is amazing, I was surprised to see pet mommy dominated by her daughter thought it was going to go the other way. But I guess she’s just too submissive super hot can’t wait for the others

uff what a rich lesbian incest I adore it

You stories, particularly this one, are so sexual without always including much sex. It is hard to stop reading because one wants (needs) to see what comes (cums) next. Visually imagining a woman between the legs of another and licking is about the hottest image possible. Can’t wait for the next installment.

This is a very interesting series. Mother is a true submissive without reservation. As an avid reader od son/mother incest stories, I would have like more Indepth character development. This is without question a 5-star series, so far.

oh my god it just keeps getting better all the time

143 comments. B-jesis thats huge. But i can understand why: its completely captivating. I dont normally seek out saphic lit, but thus chap was hot with barely any sex acts. Thats something a great writer can accomplish.

BTW: Never mind the haters, they should've know early in 1st chap this twist was inevitable. I think the haters have a case of morbid facination anyway

Not sure why people are being rude, you spent your free time didn’t get paid for writing the story and people are complying.

I think it was good keep on writing

Look, to me honestly, that twist made it so much more interesting. Really enjoyed it.

Not what I wanted, killed it stone dead

And I just lost interest. If I want a twist like that, I'll subject myself to a GoT's episode.

Michael must be in full control. It's his story. Mommy tells him what happened at the club and then he takes over Crystal and fully dominates her.

Subsequently, to prove he is in charge, he makes both Mommy and Crystal perform together for him, using a variety of toys.

Then he fucks Mommy while she eats Crystal. Then he fucks Crystal while she uses a strap on on Mommy.

All this is to show that he is the one with ultimate control, and that they have no choice but to comply with EVERY demand he makes of them, no matter how how crude or perverse his demands might be.

He uses the internet to gain information on how to further humiliate them, which leads to bondage and S&M.

When he wants an additional fucktoy, he gets Mommy to invite Grandma to visit and then adds her to his list of available women that he can use in any way that he wants.

Just wish you would have continued the mother as the dom and the daughter as the sub. It really could write itself if that plot would have continued. IMHO...

thanks for the story, I love the subject!!!

This is totally amazing. I don't read your text I actually sucking in every word. This is so amazing story. Full of life and hot erotic sex. You are just a splendid writer. I have read so far every story you have written and more are yet to come. I´m happy. Your stories are so interesting that its hard to stop and do something else for a while. Keep up the good work.

First, you're a fantastic writer. Here's a possible way out of the corner: On the drive home from the lesbian club Crystal forces Mommy to tell her all about the sexual relationship Mom eluded to earlier in the day. In doing so, Mom tells all. Not just about her and Michael, but also about Michael's plan to make his sister submit, ultimately to his rules of the family. Crystal quickly devises a plan to turn the tables on him, making the new family hierarchy Crystal, Mommy, and then now cleanup boy Michael.

Always a problem when you let the plot drive the pen. A good read so far though. You will need to get Michael involved. Have him come upon them when Mommy is eating cunt or Crystal catching Mommy maybe fucking Fred while blowing Michael. You’ve got to create a clash of wills between the kids and Michael cumin out on top. Preferably on top of Crystal, with his cock in her arse.

Incredibly hot. And I'm a male submissive. I loved it.

Thank you.

farnorthhot

I think you have mommy and daughter playing and the son walk in taking control... but then you are the writer. Great story!

What a delightful change and surprising just as well,awesome.

Great story, great writing! Suggestion for next chapter? The two kids competing for who gets ownership of mummy, The loser submitting to the other, and joining mummy-slut as a sub...

I love the twist at the end!

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Is A FUCKN WHORE

interesting plot twist.

Id like to see Crystal take over and steal Mommy from Michael , and she Crystal makes michael her pet but refuses to fuck him and only lets him fuck mommy when she doesnt want her for herself , so michael becomes second in command over mommy

I dont usually read lesbian stories but I definitely will if they are like yours: incest and dom/sub. With that being said, it was a very hot story. I was excited for the mother to have her own pet and teach her wild child daughter a lesson. And although the twist of the daughter catching on and turning the tables was absolutely exciting, I am sad it wasnt the other way around. I hope the mother is able to dom her daughter eventually.

Michael should get something off her computer to gain the upper hand and punish her for wat happen to mom

I agree with the others Micheal should be top of the kink chain as it wear and Hannah should be made to be at the bottom for trying to dom mom

I think that when they get home they get caught by Master and he gets control over Sister some how and play with Mommy inbetween before the final domination of sister and setup house the three of them

I agree that you should have them go home and then have the son take the daughter over as well I think the dynamic works with him being the one in charge especially with him being the youngest it adds just a little more flair to it

truly tells you that your readers are paying attention and are really on your side. All I can say is WOW

You should 1 have the son come to the bar and change the tide once more

2 have them go home and have the son sexually take the daughter over.

This story got so naughty having the daughter turning the table on her Mother. I loved it!

I would love to read about a power struggle between the son and daughter.

I didnt imagine i would be so turned on by mom/daughter incest considering i've been so focused on mother/son. I skipped so many such stories not realizing how enticing it would be. :)

I can almost feel that 'burning' need of sexual explosion such as her mom often does. Im off to the next chapter, I hope its there in your list. If not..... then I will have to make you my Author Pet :) lol...... hope youre smiling! :)

Kudos to you

Awesome writing, and story telling!! Great detail and insight to the characters!! Excellent job to all who made this happen.

Maybe Michael becomes her slave now? Any way you take it will be good. Loving it so far. liked the toe sucking too.

Love the twist with the mom's plans backfiring on her.

Michael disclosing his love of wearing panties and thigh highs, too!

..... Entire hot tale! Wow! The only thing that went untouched (pun intended) is Michael eating cock and getting done the hard way!

Thanks to al you commented. Part four is finally done and will be out in a few days...

Well first of I adore this series. Second, the twist was nice, but i would have preferred her be a dom over Crystal. I just love the idea of a sub to cock, but dom to cunt! Anyway Michael should definitely have Crystal as a pet. Girls like her need to be knocked down a peg or two. ALSO KEEP WRITING!!

I think that Michael and Crystal, upon realizing they are both dominant over their mommy, propose a contest to win dominance in the household. Whoever can make their Mom cum the most, or do the most depraved thing, wins dominance of their mommy, and the loser will also be submissive to the winner.

It's a Slut off.

The twist turning crystal dom to mommyslut was good. Now you just need to have her become sub to cock while maintaing dom to cunt! Thus allowing michael to maintain his dom stature to mommyslut and gain crystal as sub. Graduation should be interesting way to tie them together

This prissy little teen needs to learn her place! Michael is the man of the house and she needs to learn to respect his rules. I don't like that crystal became the Dom but I can live with it. If she dominates Michael my heart would just break. Girls like her need to be knocked down a peg.

Please please please tell me the story continues!!!!!!!!

I definitely want Michael to end up domming Crystal. I didn't enjoy the twist quite as much, although I didn't mind her starting to figure out what was happening. The switch was a little too quick. She's only a psychology major, not a full blown psychologist. lol I like the idea of her being thrown off her supposed intellectual game and realizing that for once she is, in fact, actually not in control. You tell a great tale, however. Keep up the good work!

Other than that little turn around I really like the series. I don't like Crystal being Mommy's domme, when they get home Michael needs to break her and so that she becomes the bitch to both him and Betty.

I was so into this thread right up until crystal roll reversed. Bah. I want to punish Jasmine!! To bad i can't come off anon.

As the story is currently progressing, I see three possibilities. First, Michael loses control to his sister, leaving him dominating his mother but submissive to his sister. Second, he gains control of his sister, possibly through hidden files on her computer or other compromising information. Third, he and his sister have been working together the whole time. Of course, I am reminded of a character in a series of novels who is described as, when he approaches a fork in the road, he would be just as likely to take to the trees or dig a hole as to take either path. Surprise us!

Make it so son and mom make the sister their bitch maybe have micheals friend join in and fuck the sister so she knows her place as a cock sucking cunt licking pet

michael should be the only master with sis as pet to mommy and him. when they return home Michael should take control of both.

Mommy-slut needs to be punished and Crystal needs to be tamed in Part 4.

Fucking waiting for the 4th installment! Hopefully would like to see the son become the ultimate master and a do a hardcore dp to his mommy with his sister!

This story is great and ga needs a part 4 i think michael should still make crystal his pet but they shuold both control their mom

Need part 4 soon.. can't wait, would like the idea of both sis and bro dominating the pet mom.

I like the idea of crystal as the domme. I think Michael and her should team up on mommy slut.

She should definitely cave to Michael and fredrick. And be punished for having been such a bitch in the past, mommy-slut should also get punished for not achieving her goals

as a psychology major, she saw through her mommy's attempt to make her a pet daughter. her brother, however, is only known to her as a harmless geek, easy to push around. i think crystal should have her way with her slut mom, but as soon as she comes home, micheal should put her in her place. along with that, pet mommy should be punished, for she did not accomplish her goals. also, i can imagine freddy taking the stuck up bitch sister, i am most certain that she did not treat micheals best friend with respect in the past.

i really hope you keep on writing, i am a big fan of your work in general and this story in particular.

I would continue with the idea of Crystal being Michael's sub. You have numerous lesbian submissive stories as it is.

I vote make Crystal Michaels sister-slut, that'd be really hot.

after they leave the club have the mom turn it around on the daughter and make her the slut like the plan was set out to be

what if when they return home, the mom tells Michael that the mission was successful, he fucks her as a reward, and crystal walks in,ending with crystal being totally cool with that and the mom pleases her son on one end and her daughter on the other?

if the sister is indeed a dom, the mum should twist it so her mum and brother become pets to the sexual desires of the sister.

amesburytv x

the whole twist put me off as soon as I saw the turn and I stoped reading it.,,, part one and two good this one part 3 ate it

Crystal dom her mommy-slut, and Crystal brings mommy home and does what Micheal usually does(he fucks her whenever he wants and wherever he wants). And thus Micheal takes it as an advantage and making him look like a hero coming to his slut's rescue, catches Crystal redhanded and fucks her hard as her punishment. Crystal resists but he busts her successfully....

Can't it be possible that Crystal comes home and announces to Michael that their mom is a submissive slut? From there the two can duke it out or find some common ground and share their mom equally. The two could fuck each other and you could pick whoever you want to be the dominant between them

Let's see Michael is a young version of his dead dad. Moms is more in love with Michael even more so than her late husband who as her dom

Sister is just trying to figure out what she wants. Michael should "catch" them and take charge of the situation he should have the balls to put his sister in her place. He should reveal to Chrissy that mom is his and that if she obeys he might let her play with his pet. He could also bring Fredrick into it and tell him he is going to give a shot at his sister like he did with his mom. It can be dom/sub/sub. Fredrick will be a dom in due time but Chrissy needs to be trained. She abused her relationship with brother causing the actions that will make her submit to him. He has been the schemer and needs to take charge. Chrissy liked the seduction by her mom, her mom is just too much of a sub to be in charge. Chrissy saw that and took advantage. Michael needs to get more leverage over her

You can not end it here. I look forward to more,lots more.

there's a problem in all of your stories - You trying to put too many ideas in a single storyline. Let's see - in this one You already have unfinished mother - son - sons_friend - sister relationship. And in this chapter appears MORE lesbians, more active characters, who know the secret. It's a huge load for one story. You should close some turn points before going to new ones.

It would make a story more easy for a reader's mind.

At this point, as a reader, I have these uneasy questions:

1. How will react Frederick when he find out about sister and Michael? In reality, when you sharing such secrets, truth will be found eventually. And man is a jealous creature.

2. Why is Michael seducing his sister THROUGH his mother? That's just a sign of a lousy Master. If he is a real thing, he mus do that himself. Otherwise he's risking to be left alone (for example, Crystal could find the idea of brother fucking or owning her disgusting.)

3. Reader's place as a submissive mother.

Well, I'm a dominating type, so I do not find such viewpoint very attractive, but it's bearable. Problem is, that you focus everything on Michael being successful in his quest over his sister. If it would be mother's personal mission, then OK, do it like this. But mother is not the real center of attention here. Michael is. And he is left behind a curtain - nobody knows, what he's thinking or what he's capable of. In this chapter the real hero is Crystal and she isn't very different from her brother (methods are the same). And this leads to problem number...

4. Same lousy characters.

I have commented some of your works before (sorry for my bad English, since I'm Lithuanian). I noticed You repeating the same pattern - good story idea with undeveloped characters. Same way of dominating (blackmail or via sub help). Your Masters have no real talent or charm, your subs are extremely submissive (with a very few exceptions) and You always forget some of them in a process. Even when your Masters have a blackmail material, they always forget that in a process. When they don't have anything, they all trying to go via blackmail route (that's not the ONLY way, you know...).

It's like You discovered some tricks, but forgot about HUNDREDS which left. Do some research before writing. SM is a big world.

Have it be that that was Michaels plan all along. Michael found out about her lesbian attraction and plotted with her to seduce their mother

I half agree with Verbicide and FallenSaviour: Your stories have gotten formulaic. But that is NOT a bad thing. You've found a formula that works, one that you obviously enjoy, and one that keeps your fans coming back; its what got me interested and keeps me coming back. That said, I also agree that you should try writing some different styled stories like Verbicide suggested if for no other reason than to stretch your literary muscles.

However, don't do it for part 4, wait for a new story. You've built up this promise about how the story is going to progress and end, and you need to stick with that, or risk becoming the literotica variant of M. Night Shyamalan. You promised and built up the son doms the mother, and would gain the sister as well. The sister domme-ing the mother could introduce a good plot twist to give you more story, but only so long as it doesn't change the story's central premise. (Also, I'm a shy/nerdy dominant male like Micheal, so I suppose in this particular case I'm a bit more biased than usual. But that's also part of the point, that's how you drew me in, now you need to keep me [not just ME-me, but the fans that I metaphorically represent]).

You've already essentially written your way out of this corner: Your very own "Best Present Ever" series, the one that got me started reading your work in the first place. Only now you have the mother to use as an added tool in Michael's seduction of Crystal. I agree with other commentors that Michael got too lazy in trying to have his mom seduce his sister and he needs to do it himself. Pretending to sub to his sister and then turning it around on her could work (I've known first year psyche majors, and even if I were to believe they could easily see through the mother that intuitively (without having already done it themselves...hmm a possible spin-off self contained slightly different story perhaps?], they would not be able to see through the brother fake-submitting only to turn it around).

Or if you don't want to re-hash that (and I don't blame you), incite the power struggle between the two siblings like other readers have suggested. Find someway to have Betty message Michael what is really going on/talk to him in private. Then have him interrupt while she is pleasuring Crystal. Just wait until she has her eyes closed from her mother's ministrations, then come up and say something along the lines of "You know it always annoyed me when you took my stuff without asking" after he's already deep in either of her holes. Possibly causing Betty to stop from surprise as an extra way to get Crystal's attention. Then some banter, and sibling fighting with mom caught giving pleasure in the middle. And then they try to dom(me) the other at the same time, giving Betty contradictory orders. At this point, she has to decide who to obey more. Which SHOULD be Michael, since that's where the story's premise, the buildup, everything lies (and yes, my own sense of wish fulfillment that I, as well as everyone else, comes to this site to read about). Maybe have Michael order the mother to sit on Crystal's face and hold her down while he teases her to the point of "breaking" and then fucks her. You've already set her up as a possible switch when in the presence of a stronger dom(me), and you've already set Michael up as a stronger dom.

Or have Betty go back to mother mode, and threaten to take both kids toys away if they don't "play nice and share," so you can have them on equal ground. While that's not the particular ending I'm rooting for, it wouldn't be nearly as depressing a let down as the mother betraying Michael and having him submit, or outright lose her, to Crystal.

But, it is YOUR story and ultimately only you can decide what YOU want. I'm just offering advice like you asked. Write what you enjoy, and others will enjoy it too. And remember: Twists are good so long as they only add a level of depth/complexity, and NOT when they subvert the story's central premise.

PS: Long time reader, first time commenter. And no matter HOW this story turns out, I eagerly await more of your work! Keep it up!

PPS: Sorry it got so long, I have an unfortunate tendency to be long winded and detailed...even in my apologies for it :P I swear I'll stop now.

alright so im a boy and my sister marred a man and he has a sister my age and she is SEXY like d cups and a huge ass and she is only a early teen (my age too) how would I get her to fuck me please make a story on what should I do and please title it the stepsister challenge info on her she is sometimes nice to me, more a bitch than nice, she is shyish and is not a slut, I want to be her dom, how please help

love the series got me off 3 nights in a row, would like to add the sister as the dom of the mom but the son as the dom of both, add the one teacher from the second part and have the mom waking up son to a cocksucking

The true promise of this story is that:

(1) mommy gets lost in her submission - and thus finds her own fulfillment.

(2) sister submits to her brother - and thus finds her own fulfillment.

(3) brother excepts his role as a man as a lover and as a caretaker of his "wards".

From here I strongly recommend high drama! Daughter needs to be "wet her pants"

afraid. in need of a "shining knight" a hero, - her brother. So many different ways you can take us from here....please PLEASE take us!

Please include Frederick's mom in this story....it's only fair and adding another older woman to this series would make it even better.

I liked the first story in this series very much, the 2nd was not quite as good, and this 3rd one is to my great disappointment, quite awful.

It never fulfilled the promise at the end of story 1, which made Crystal sound like a very stuck up sister who would be very difficult to seduce. Instead, she's a shoo-in. In the meantime Michael has become a total and complete asshole, overdoing his Master role.

Consequently Mommy has become predictable boring.

There virtually no description of what Crystal looks like, nor any challenge in seducing her. There are authors who handle this kind of challenge really well.

Have Crystal be Michaels slave. It's always better when the person who was hurt gets revenge on the bitch (Crystal). It would be so much better to have the nerds win. The read would be so much more enjoyable.

Also, this has become one of my favorites story's, right after Bedding the Babysitter, so don't stop writing.

Signed,

Your fan

Please continue. Perhaps you could have Crystal turn the the tables on Michael and dominate him?

This is the best series I have ever read please carry on i am looking forward to it

This has got to be one of the best incest series's ever! To continue, I have two suggestions:

1. Micheal has been working with Crystal all along

2. Mother texts the news to Micheal. When the two get home, Micheal immediately shows his powers over his mother, ordering her right in front of his sister, then goes on to either try to make them both his subs, or works with his sister to make their mom a sub for both of them.

Whatever you chose, I'm sure It'll be awesome.

As I was reading this installment, I started thinking that maybe Michael was working with Crystal all along. So an idea for your next installment would be that Mommy finds out Michael had this set up with Crystal from the beginning and wanted to see her become humiliated and become Crystal's slut as well.

I think only Michael can truely put his sister in her place. Maybe you can get crystal interested like how he got mom. Arouse her curiosity in the 'new girlfriend' he has, as a gate way into checking out her brother, maybe even get a peek at his naked body and let her see that little brother aint so little anymore. It could be possible that the right dom just hasn't come along yet to woo her since mom is too submissive and doesn't have enough dominant mentality to do it. Try using the woman from the club to help her realize that. by having the woman real goal to be tricking Crystal into thinking she is trying to help her when all she wants is to make Crystal her submissive slut too right along with mom, and then let brother pray upon realisation.

But weather you use this idea or not is up to you. I have enjoyed your story so far and hope to read more soon.

Hope I helped.

Love, your Fan!

Loved it, please keep it coming. I think that Michael should end up with both sister and mother as his sluts but it's your call.

You have an anxious group of people waiting for lots of further chapters. Have lots of suggestions but you are surely full of ideas.

I doubt thaty you remember me but i had sent you a message once befor about how your story had added fuel to the fire between my wife and myself.My wife passed away shortly after that and i've a little off .But i was reading some to pass my nights and i came acrossed the pet mommy stories and reread 1&2 and just finished 3 . I hope to read 4 andhow ever many more you do . As i said in my last message this story is so hottttttttttttt. Thank you, pcb_beachbum2002@yahoo.com

Enjoyed the story although not fond of lesbian sex but the build up was awesome mommy being so forthcuming about the sexual frankness with daughter and the twist was even better cyrstal taking the charge.crystal being the physce major figured out her seduction by mom, she could most definetly figure out that her shy brother is having sex with a woman he has known forever his mom. I am sure you will build up some new twist n a great story. Thanks & eagerly awaiting the follow up chapter.

Great story lost its way i love your sub stuff. I think you did lose your way a bit. Maybe you could have the mother stand up and say that she wasn't humiliated this way by her husband and that will the last time this will happen and walk out of the club. later confronting both children telling them that she wont be treated poorly by them again.this might give a bit of an out and give the mother a bit more balance in the relationship with her children.

I also put a comment on "LIKE MOTHER LIKE DAUGHTER", also needs happy ending, thanks for listening to me ramble

Michael dominates mrs Hughes, mrs Hughes dominates crystal, crystal dominates Betty.

I think having Crystal as a psyche major, it would be better if she was full blooded lesbian and so she trains her mother over and over and when she's finished, the mom can't do anything else but submit to the daughter, then when Michael tries to reassert his dominance, he ends up losing and becoming a pet to his teacher, Mrs Hughes.

Maybe she could still be Mommy's sub. Let her think.she's in control, and when Michael comes onto the picture, he asserts his dominance, and forces Crystal to be Mommy's pet

First, let me say that I do not find your stories repetitive as a few others have noted. If anything, I believe you introduce a good mix of fresh ideas in each installment. Second, I would love to see a power struggle between the siblings with the brother winning and. Oth still dominating mom. Maybe everybody can dominate grandma next :) whatever the case thanks for writing!

Michael needs to reassert his control over his mother and when Crystal tries to come off all snotty , she then gets surpirsed , that she is no longer able to get over on him . She Dommes mommy , Michael Dommes them both , perhaps with some support from his freind. I can see the 2 young men overpowering her and she begins to REALLY enjoy being the sub, too , finding out that she is a switch . SO many wonderfful stories , that you have written , and what a GREAT body YOU have. I picture you , whenever you start writing about the mothers. Ed

The new chapter surprised me. (I like surprises). It took a twist i didn't expect but I enjoyed it.

Please write a new chapter. Yes, Michael and Crystal need to stay in the story. Crystal needs to be dommed by her brother and have him use both mom and daughter. I like the you kept the language nasty. It makes the story much more exciting for me. Make mom and daughter share a gloryhole booth or a porn theater together with both of them covered in cum for her son's pleasure.

I look forward to reading the new chapter. As I hope you know, you're my favorite author.

I think you need to have the daughter submit to her brother and have her on a lower level than the mom. Basically Michael needs to once and for all assert his dominance over his slaves.

you could introduce some sort of power vacuum between the brother and sister.

Mother lies to son saying she had the sister as a sub, initially the son takes them both (after a stand off and persuasion) and knowingly and lovingly he returns the submission in the 5th chapter - strap on city. (introduce a few new characters too)

is right, as much as i love your stories and sequels, they are fairly repetitive. in addition, most of your female dominant characters seem to have very little regard for their submissives. or at the least dont show it very well. while the sex itself is usually hot in every story of yours i've read, i find that the settings at time stretch willing suspension of disbelief. since other than a need to submit, most of your subs dont have a reason to sub to the ones domming.

as for trying something new, perhaps a story with domination not at the focus, a simple story about people falling in love. no masters no slaves, just a simple love story.

as for this story, if you want to continue it, it would be very similar to your blackmailing bitch sister story or several other stories you've done where a brother doms a sister.

all that said, you are still my favorite writer here, and i check frequently for your updates.

Now you must make the mommy a total slut around the house. Have the siblings argue over who is going to use the slut. Make her do dirty, public things

the daughter needs to become submissive to Michael. The story would have been more intriguing if the daughter would have been the submissive character. Now you have to a competition between the siblings for mother attention. The flow of the story changes entirely.

Unlike most others here who are offering ideas for a way out with this story, I thought I'd go with a more general critique of a trend. Recently, almost all of your stories have fallen into a rut. Single, submissive mother is blackmailed/dominated into a series of sexual encounters. Sometimes it's her children that do it (how a submissive raises dominant personalities is a mystery to me though) and sometimes it's acquaintances. This repeated formula in and of itself is only part of the problem.

The lesbian club is a crutch. The lack of any hard limits on what the sub will do lends the tales an "action movie" feel where the reader is subjected to a continuous flow of meaningless confrontations or in this case sexual encounters. Writing the stories with sequels in mind is also a crutch. It's the written version of Hollywood's sequel addiction. Your best stories are self-contained and require no sequel, even if there are plot threads left hanging. "Stocking Tales" is a perfect example. Could a sequel be done? Sure. Is it necessary for the growth of the story and the characters? Not in the least.

Therein lies the problem with this story and a few of the series you've written. The sequels are essentially simply more of the same. There is no character growth. There is no conflict, since somehow none of the sexual hi-jinks will be revealed in a way that could prove damaging to the characters lives, fictional though they may be. My suggestion would be to step away from your current formula and concentrate on a good, self-contained story with emotional growth for the characters and perhaps some deeper narrative exposition on why they are the way they are.

After all, a child who is willing to humiliate their parent in a social setting has passed the point of simply being a dominant personality, they have demonstrated a monumental contempt for that parent. Since parents and children are inextricably linked, the willingness to suffer the label of "the kid whose parent subjected themselves to (insert humiliating act here) in public, at their own hands" and the mix of sympathy and again, contempt such a label would bring reveals a deep hatred for that parent. Even in the BDSM community incestuous relations are generally disapproved of.

Anyway, to put the brakes on a long and rambling rant, my suggestion is too tighten up your storylines and focus on self-contained tales instead of repetitive sequels. You'll avoid the type of storytelling trap you've fallen into here.

Another great story. Keep up the great work. I suggest u find a way for Michael to seduce his sister even after current events. Or I would defenetly would like to read a story where a friend seduces his friend mom. I'm a fan. Keep up the great work!!!!

Theres already à caméra set up. Use or to make the crystal submit .