All Comments on '"Pet Mommy": Nerd Orgy'

Another excellent piece of the story! those lucky nerds and her lol would you ever dress up as princess leia? please let Seductions be the next chapter x

As always, another addition to a great series. Keep up the great erotic work!!!

Shorter than your normal texts, almost as if you had rushed it.

Keep up the longer stories.

-=WW=-

Great stories but Fredrick or Simon I was confused but perhaps Michael should dom is grandma!!!

Would have enjoyed a finale of the two sex kittens cleaning mommy up with their tongues, but no complaints!

Loved it Jasmine, looking forward to whatever else you dream up. It is always hot : )

That was fun to read and exciting.

This is my second favorite piepiece from you, first being dp mommy. only complaint is that this feels rushed? Maybe longer like your other stories. Maybe a little more exhibitionist with the customs in public places?

Mostly good, just confused about Frederick vs. Simon?

SSL also is to commended on her great list of Favorites. But I just don't care for a son who subjects his mother to a gang bang. To me a mother's vagina should be sacred to her boy. He came out of that beautiful hairy hole between her legs, and there are lots and lots of sons who'd love to pay it a proper tribute. First, with their lips and tongue and whole greedy mouth. Then with the fat young cock between their own legs, now harder than ever before in their lives, ready for heavy duty action up their own mother's cunt. Why any boy should want to share his mother's mommy-hole with a group of other males is beyond me.

I'm guessing the road trip involves going to visit sister?

Also the Simon vs. Frederick confusion in this story and between stories definitely needs to be decided one way or the other before the next story.

Love reading and stroking to your stories hot lady. Have only submitted one myself and you are inspiring me to do more

Definitely pet mommy: seductions . Dying to read about another milf submitting to her son

I just finished the series so far. I really enjoyed it. While I'll never understand the people that get upset about stories not being realistic, I have to admit some of the continuity problems really threw me off.

The Simon/Frederick thing was an issue for me. The first time it came up I was lost and it took me quite a while to get back into the story. I also paused at what looked like a Sarah/Betty problem.

I still love the stories and look forward to more. In my own sick twisted way I kind of wish there was something going on between Micheal and Frederick too.

I hope you do continue the saga. Great job!!!

hi

Thanks for the comments on the continuity...

I'll have to go and fix those and send in a new draft, unfortunately I've been on the road and the story is sitting on my home computer....

Grrrr

Jasmine may 2015

Really great story. I hope you add more and also cont. The bride submission one I'm looking forward to the family orgy.

I vote for a seduction of simons mom. GREAT stories, great imagination.

Looking forward to Frederick's mom joining the submission team. Maybe he has a sister or an aunt?

I like this series, but this chapter seemed rushed and half assed to me.

All mothers should like this story. I have had my wife do this one time. We had fifteen sons and fathers working on her. She sucked and fucked for hours. We took movies and pictures of the whole party. Seeing two dicks in mouth,pussy and ass at one time. After this happen we were invited to other parties where husbands have a party of their own. We have about twenty families in our group. Mothers and wives love having everything going on at one time. Having so many women you get different sizes and in makes fun. Sons get your friends fucking your mom and husband have your friends have fun with your wives. Love to show you my wife and let you share her. If you know who I am come and share.

Quite enjoyed it. I really like your writing, but I also thought that this wasn't quite as good as some of the other "Pet Mommy" stories.

This was the first submission erotica I have read. I am very impressed and will be reading more of your content.

This chapter seemed to be too far out of character for Michael and mommy slut. It lacked the true passion and intimacy shared by master and slave. Sorry SSL, but you missed on this one.

looking forward to the other chapters mentioned.

Yo love the story I would login to lazy but dude I'm subed to you and I can't wait for you to continue this series please continue

Keep them coming, I love all of the stories in this series! Plus I want to find out what happened with Freddy's mother

I have to agree with Whipthrob.. So Off trackside, what an understatement.. Nerds!! What were you thinking????. What happened to the Aunty and cousin???. Clearly you don't read the comments left by your readers to see which direction they would like this story to go. But there again you're the one writing this story and if you do decide to write another chapter ,I for one won't waste my time reading it. Clearly I'm really really really disappointed with this effect.. 1 star.. P.S

You can't possibly be the same writer who wrote the What Mom Knows series because that was a masterpiece .

This is such an enthralling story. While mom is submissive, she gets everything she wants. She in essence is in control. Great read. Please continue this, and please bring back his sister.

Hurry up with more please

dude write the last 2 and the twist on how u got her daughter was genius

Come on please, you can't leave us hanging. Need to know about Frederick's mother among other unresolved plots

Nice story, but short... More details near end. And what about finish with a FFFM, after all M did get the younger women room #, but you did not use it or add them to the mix?!? A little lame...! DHD

EASY GUYS IF YOU ARE A FAN OF THIS WRITER YOU KNOW THE STORIES CONTINUE IT TAKES TIME TO PUT OUT GOOD WORK..

THEN AGAIN I HOPE I WON'T BE TURNED INTO A LIAR!!!!

I want to read about getting Frederick's mother to summit to him, and the Road Trip sounds very interesting too.

Good series, I would like more details about Betty's looks, and banging more nerds.

Damn this is a great series! Does us all a favor and write the whole trefica Road Trip, Seductions and Mile High Club!

wow I think you could be a real good other ,I have stayed hard the hoal time every time I have read one of you mommy pet ch. this was better then a poren mag. for me

and look forwerd to the hopefully long suduceing of the mother and the road trip I have to give you a score of 100 this the best thanks for shareing your talent with us

if some one gave you a sunareeho could you turn it in to a strory? I dont know how to get ahoald of you but if you ever feel lke doing that I have few ideas but I am no wrighter . from DC newrancher

Absolutely riveting. The whole series.

do road trip next

ROAD TRIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

I LOVED IT! Goodness... Please upload the next installment. It is needed.

It's been awhile since you wrote your last chapter in this series. Please write it and post it soon. I am a huge fan of yours and I have read many of your works. I am looking forward to more of this and your other series.

This is a comment about the series as a whole, simply brilliant. One of, if not the best erotic stories I've read. Keep up the good work. More please.

This whole series is a total turn on! From a woman's point of view this could so easily happen. Everything written by this author has been great! Can't wait for the next chapter. Would love to see how son and daughter finally hooked up.

Keep up the good work!

I only hope that there are many more coming. I'll read them all.

Thank you very much. The best was when you switched the mother daughter. That was fabulous when her daughter took over the Domme role. Wonderful!!

farnorthhot

I've read all chapters. Please bring back the Sister/Daughter!!!I see that it's been a long time since you wrote these chapters, but you should consider writing more. Thank you!!! Amazing work!!!

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So delicate seductions descriptions of Betty towards her son and daughter and beautifully analyzed submissive behavior as a mother in need of sexual attention from a master since her hubby death.

I love the way that domination submission and family love is displayed as experimentation from the young boy and sister and incest love is in the background of the canvas everywhere.

I expect that the sock from turning a candidate ?mistress as her daughter to submissive slut should be really big for the young girl. Is not something usual once the character has been developed to a person to change so easily and with a flip of a coin especially in women and more for the mother who seems to dominate her for a moment. This is a bit Odd. BEtty is not only needed,want deeply, begging and trying hard to be dominotated but it is more than obvious that need to be owned by a beloved close to her, an intimate one in the family, such as his son and seems to me as a potential future slave , who definitely cannot express such behavior is not even in her genes.

I thing it should be further explored from your so well writing abilities developing a series of stories for daughter properly introduced by her brother and mother to worship an incest lesbian relationship with Betty learning to adore sex with her mother not only as part of her duties to amuse him and his friends but as a well expressed need for mother and daughter to share a master and broaden their lesbian sex to new limits.

I wanted to see Betty to be more in to mentoring Michael to explore together the limits of her submissive sluty nature as instructions and sessions even of BDSM nature like fisting vaginal and anal which she likes, introducing light bondage, clumps and or spanking various part of her body as part of his experimentation.

This can be done also and as an incest threesome exchanging ideas among them , or like mother proposing what to do to sister and sis assisting mother what new horizons to explore with her and her son until she succeeds in having her son as a real devoted hubby and insatiate undoubtful and limitless master indoors and a truly devoted incest lesbian lover even knowing it won't last for long.

And of course brother master is usually a lot more severe and harsh dominating over her sister than a mother master ,so sister can always experience deeper submission techniques than a beloved mother.

E.g tits and nipples are the first thing to experiment with as young boy. Dominance over nipples and cause arousal with pain feels good for any submissive woman to receive ; for any woman anywhere I must admit.

The fishing of submissive candidates is superb invention also I enjoyed too much.

Ganbang was very resourceful presented as a game and as a phantasy come true from a submissive slut and very true and close to R.L too ,but I would like to see Betty receiving a true ganbang from the furious husbands, relatives and lovers related to the victims of her fishing activities or even a lesbian ganbang from the women at the bar or women betrayed by the men that stuck to her spide web for her pleasure

Or maybe find her a trusted relative to airtight her regularly with her two masters since she enjoys that so much.

I really don't want to stalk you but rather to give you ideas to include in future stories the magnificent and delicate way you have done... go go write more ...is wonderful.

. Sequal please!! Love this series!

What an amazing writer. I have lost count of the orgasms I have had reading all 5 stories. I so wish I was her with my Son and Daughter - Thank you xxx

Iam also a good mom for my son to use, and while I find this really sexy and I love dirty sex not sure I could do this. But please write more stuff. Loved it Betty P

I would really like to see "Pet Mommy: Road Trip" and "Pet Mommy: Seductions" out of those 3.

As a fan of the story so far I would love to see it continue and of course to keep them cuming😉

The way the stories have presented was really good and really arousing many.. stories are my choice for cuming..

You are a real mommy slut.

Great series. So sorry that it came to a close.

Can't wait for the next chapters. Loving it.

I really want to see Frederick's Mom to join in!

great story and series. 5 stars all the way. I am looking forward to reading more like this.

I’d give 10 stars if possible!

fantastic series

top notch story telling and sexual imagery

i wish you continue the series especially Pet Mommy: Seductions

You need to write those new additional episodes now!.. And don’t forget about ‘ Incest Resort’!!

I read a lot of online erotica of all genres. I must say that this is one of The Best incestuous themed stories ever. Congratulations Jasmine and Please Continue!

<3. Zoom_loom2002

Please continue this. Have her join the two women then finish the subduction of Frederick's mom.

Great story. Your story develops as you wonder where you can take Mommy. My suggestion is to make her 'Public Pet Mommy.' She's done the gang bang in disguise, the next barrier to break could be public sex.

Imagine this as a day out: Mommy is dressed like a strict teacher - A cafe, bar, store changing room, public toilet, public park, bus shelter, the bus and to finish off he takes her into his school where she plays the naughty teacher.

This could enable you to have her realise she enjoys flaunting her sexuality. Just an idea.

You have me craving to see her slutty dress so much. I’ve read this series over two days and I have to say my hormones are literally bouncing off the walls right now. One of the best erotic stories I’ve ever read, and I read a lot of incest.

Kisses. Lucinda36 xxx

I can hardly wait until the seduction of Freds mom. I hope its long and nasty as possible.

Outstanding series. Really loved every story. Looking forward to more

Hands down one of the best series I've read so far. Betty is amazing (I did skim the end of chapter 3 as I didn't like the daughter being in control of her) and the way she feeds off the commands of Michael. Ill keep an eye glued to your page for new if any content! Great work!

Sadly I don't think we are getting any more stories of Betty. It has been 4 years now since this one.

A really fantastic series ...love it and want more

I'm working my way through all your stories and this is by far the best series so far and hope there are many more chapters to come, especially Pet Mommy: seduction, we need to know if Freddy gets a pet of his own, does Joey get a threesome with Pet Mommy and Master and how about Hannah the dom owner of the lesbian nightclub, oh and not forgetting when Crystal comes home to her Master with her own slave Vanessa?

I hope to see more chapters soon

I love this series but I really hope that the Sister character would not dissappear.I think that sis should also become more and more submissive and engaging in sex with mom more often.

Please silk revisit Betty and mike. They need some more time together.

OMG...i love these stories. I can just picture all that cum all over her.

Im at work reading this so fucking horny and my underwear soaked

With pre-cum. Your a good writer. I want to eat this mommy sluts asshole

Soooo bad.

These stories are so good, you should continue this series. To be honest, I would very much like to see the daughter Crystal get involved more often, I'd also like to have some more alone time between Mike and his Pet Mommy. Just my two cents, great story overall.

All of this was great, imo. And as for the next stories, if I were to put these in order, I'd say do Seduction first, then The Mile-High Club, then Road Trip and finish it off with Porn Movie. Just my idea.

awesome stuff if you do continue this I would think the order should be;

Pet Mommy: Seduction

Pet Mommy has to complete her seduction of Frederick's Mom.

Pet Mommy: The Mile-High Club

Pet Mommy and son and join the mile-high club.

{going to visit sis and remind her of her place}

as you mentioned sis living on the west coast {probably somewhere is california}

Pet Mommy: Porn Movie

Pet Mommy makes an incest movie where no one knows they are actually Mother and son and daughter.{only the movie has mom , son , and sis}

Whether you continue this series please keep on writing. One of my fav authors on the site

Just when you think it can't get any worse...

i don't care about the series specifically i just want you to keep writing because i don't even have to tap myself and i can cum from your stories especially this series.

The straight up her arse without lube doesn’t seem true, perhaps put a tube full up her before playtime maybe.

That's one that I would love to read which is the seduction of Frederick's mom

Great as always but it finished a bit suddenly. K london

Marvelously well written, great characters and descriptions. Having been a nerd in high-school, my only comment was that Michael bridged that gap from nerd to master really quickly without a hitch. Even so, it was a great read.

I really would look forward to the seduction of Fredericks mom, and then a porn star, then the mile-high-club as they visit Crystal.

I thank the author for announcing that there were other males involved "doing" the mom, even in a gangbang. As I dislike/hate such things, I only read the first part, that by the way, I liked quite a lot. If it would have continued with the seduction of other females....but no, the author added other males and thus killed the story, at least for me. I usually am not lucky and the sharing and gangbangs occur in these types of stories; bad luck, inconveniences of apparently forming part of a minority.

Awesome

Great concept, and as I’m a nerd even hotter

I love this series, really enjoyed reading. You should write another chapter, maybe Pet Mommy: Porn Movie. That would be amazing!

well this story was ok but not as good as the others for some reason the gangbang really wassn't that excciting

ruined the story. went from dom to cuckold. it started so well. damn frederick and friends

I totally agree with those who disliked the gangbang and the cuckolding with other males. Those things turn me off completely. As soon as I arrived to those scenes I passed them completely. I like how this author writes but some of her stories are so disappointing... Now, before start reading, I see if there are gangbangs and other males involved, to ignore such stories.

If I were a mom I would want to screw my son for whatever reason. If I had the opportunity I would love a gang-bang with strangers while I were masked - but the ultimate GOOD TIMES would to be masked with a large number of men that I actually knew, like from work or neighbors, or my sons/daughters teachers or coaches,. In retrospect I guess I would just like to be gang-banged by all cummers.

I loved the story more because he was a nerd with a larger penis and still had compassion for others. I also loved the part that he turned his sister. The love story of the mom and son was beautiful and totally honest. Give us more stories of the big dicked nerd and how he comes out on top. Great story , thank you

I hope theres gonna be a new part mommy pet : Road Trip although we already have a part of his siter it's short and not satisfying well getting new part of this one is almost impossible as this is last updated 2015 so updating it after 7 years is a bit wierd nonetheless still waiting for next part if theres ever gonna be one ☺️☺️

Hope theres gonna be next part Road Trip but theres a slim chance of this getting new part when there's no update in seven years but if theres ever new part ill read it for sure anyways i just really hope there's gonna be one ☺️☺️

How about frederick’s mom?

A very hot sexual serial of our joy. Keep them coming so mom and son can fulfill all our fantasies

5-star series. I hope you continue the series. Reading your potential story lines, I would like to read one about mother and daughter receiving corporal punishment, both separately and together.

The leadin to the orgy was fun, and the later visit to the two girl’s room would have made a good ending. I know the orgy was supposed to be the highlight, but having never participated in one, I was not able to get mentally involved with this one. There are a lot more directions this story could go.

Really looking forward to the rest of your planned stories. This is a fun series.