All Comments on 'Pet Sitting'

Nothing wrong with that ending. In fact it was a wonderful story. Keep up the excellent writing.

to not subtract for errors. Clothes are made from cloths, but who's counting. I enjoyed the details, what the Hell, the whole story! Thanks for the entertainment.

Just glad I can read and enjoy your story and even if I did find words wrong or any mistakes - I would never complain like the idiots on here do. If you don't like reading then quit bitching and go to a movie. I voted you a 5 and thought the story was just outstanding, sad ending but a very good story.! Thanks. JAG/TSO

A great story with a sad ending. Life is not always fair and happy endings not a given.

I think it was a great story. I did not notice any of the things others have written about. Just keep writing wonderful stories!

She had a good deal actually - men are only useful as sperm donors. After that, they're pretty worthless and need to be put out to pasture - or put down.

Yes that was a tragic ending, but you handled with dignity. Brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you for writing.

I don't know why I would give this story a 5. It's way too sad for a romance. It needs a second to bring a happy ending to make it a true romance. I might suggest a younger brother to her lover for a weekend. Otherwise this very definitely is NOT a romance. OH I know writer you think your being smart thinking the imagination is more important to the reader than a story, but it's not! Be a writer and make an exciting and earth shattering second chapter. Maybe you can't because your NOT good enough...

BIG TURN OFF!!!!!! I want a woman to look like a woman NOT DAMN A SIX YEAR OLD. just my opinion and I DO NOT GIVE A SHIT about what anyone else prefers. other opinions are ok by me, but I can have mine too.

... if I could give it! Ignore "timlauder". This was a well written story. In life not everything has a happy ending. Also, I am not fussy. I would not kick your shaved pussy out of bed, any more than I would reject a natural bush. My late first wife had shaved one time when I returned from a business trip. Surprisingly it wasn't that great a turn on, but it was nice not to have to pick hair out of my teeth before her bush grew back.

I loved the story. keep writing.

Incidentally, I have more than 10 years on timlauder so age has nothing to do with my attitude to the way my lovers choose to groom themselves.

i thought the beginning was great I laugh at the way you wrote her mishap.

but was sad in the end, but life sometimes get's in the way of dreams

good story

You touched me heart and left me in tears. I just let go of the love of my life. I can't bear to think about it just yet.

But the drastic switch from sweet romance to tragedy threw me for a loop. I read Literotica to escape from the heavy stuff.

This was a good read. Yes the ending was very sad and I too was cut up about his death but the baby was a good ending.

Wow, nice story, a rollercoaster. Easy five

before Harry dies the story was great

Definately 5. Yeah not all goid stories end with "they lived happily ever after". I generally don't like tragedy. BUT you brought it off very well and you certainly were a 5 both through out. There were a couple of typos here and there but even with spell and style checkers and editors they can still slip through. Kerp up the great work

Sincerely, The Infamous Anonymous

Easy 5 without the ending

An emotional tragedy isn't what draws people to Literotica. And the ending wasn't what I expected at all - although once the police were mentioned, it was pretty clear where this was headed. Despite that, I really enjoyed this story - enough that this is my first ever comment on a story - and I gave it the full 5 stars.

I accidentally tripped across another story by this author called Blackmail Saga and I loved it. That made me try this story which I also thought was fantastic. This author has a real chatty and engaging style that makes me really like the characters that are created. I plan on sampling some more stories, and I sure hope this author keeps writing new stories.