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Click hereI called her; explained who I was and why I was calling. She was hurt and didn't want to have anything to do with me; I think it was because we're pretty much the same age. Somehow that didn't seem right to her. You know, her dad with a girl the same age as his daughter. I gave her my number anyway and told her my due date. After the baby was born, I called again; this time, she at least thanked me for letting her know.
I've graduated from a local college and got a good job; so I have my own place now. It's in the same complex as my sister's apartment -- Karen's the one who found it for me. I think she wants to keep an eye on me; you know, after all that's happened.
Harriet was born a year ago, today. It's her first birthday and Karen insisted on having a little party for the baby at her apartment; Harriet's sister, Alice, is coming by later to celebrate with us.
Harriet is such a sweet baby and I wish I could say she looks, or acts, just like her dad ... but I hardly knew him ... I don't even have a picture of him. Memory is such a fragile thing; I can scarcely conjure up his sweet face anymore as I lie awake at night and think about how briefly our paths through the universe crossed.
I still cry; I cry that I never had the chance to love him the way I longed to love him. I cry because he never got to see the baby we created. I cry because his child will never know her father. But most of all ... I cry because I still love him so, and miss him more than I can tell.
I accidentally tripped across another story by this author called Blackmail Saga and I loved it. That made me try this story which I also thought was fantastic. This author has a real chatty and engaging style that makes me really like the characters that are created. I plan on sampling some more stories, and I sure hope this author keeps writing new stories.
An emotional tragedy isn't what draws people to Literotica. And the ending wasn't what I expected at all - although once the police were mentioned, it was pretty clear where this was headed. Despite that, I really enjoyed this story - enough that this is my first ever comment on a story - and I gave it the full 5 stars.
Definately 5. Yeah not all goid stories end with "they lived happily ever after". I generally don't like tragedy. BUT you brought it off very well and you certainly were a 5 both through out. There were a couple of typos here and there but even with spell and style checkers and editors they can still slip through. Kerp up the great work
Sincerely, The Infamous Anonymous
This was a good read. Yes the ending was very sad and I too was cut up about his death but the baby was a good ending.
But the drastic switch from sweet romance to tragedy threw me for a loop. I read Literotica to escape from the heavy stuff.
You touched me heart and left me in tears. I just let go of the love of my life. I can't bear to think about it just yet.
i thought the beginning was great I laugh at the way you wrote her mishap.
but was sad in the end, but life sometimes get's in the way of dreams
good story