All Comments on 'Pet Teachers'

I feel a little dumber after having read that. I think it short circuited brain cells that can never be repaired. And by the looks of the score, I am not the only one. Keep trying.

You should write a sequel, with more foot play and a focus on Donna.

@Jedd11:

If you have any constructive feedback, then I'd like to hear it. If not, then there's nothing to comment on.

@Anonymous:

Thanks for the feedback!

I've been toying with the idea of a series of sequels that flesh out how each woman was broken, so we'll see ...

Speaking of which, what particularly attracts you to the Donna character?

Simply awful. Never again cyka

@Anonymous (Awful)

The 8,000-plus views and 5-plus favorites beg to differ ...

Mainly because it’s unique, and how you can write a foot fetish story on it that no one has done before. You have created a character, who must walk on her feet daily, and I would not be surprised if she is expected to lick them clean to mimic monkey grooming and constantly eats all food with her toes. It will be interesting what you can do with it if you explore the idea more.

It would also be interesting if you leave them with some concept of their former identity and they have no control over their actions and they either hate it or secretly like it. I look forward to reading your future works

I read your story after reading the comments at the end of the story. While I understand why people may have had a problem with 'Pet Teachers" for not having raucous, raunchy over-the-top sex in every paragraph, it wasn't their story to tell. It was yours.

Yes, I would have liked to see more character development, and I would have liked to see more character interaction, but that is only my opinion. I did like the way you set up the conflict between Melanie and Victoria.

If you decide to add more chapters to this that would be great. If not, I look forward to reading anything else you write. Thank you.

@Anonymous (Donna):

Thanks for the kind words.

If I write any sequel, then I'd do one for each woman broken by Melanie. You've given me some food for thought ... Thanks!

@Funewriter1:

Your kind words are appreciated.

you are one sick bastard with the shit and piss, the story could have done without that in it, 1 star.

@sexymeup

To each his own ...

how was one of the teachers able to lay an egg?

@Anonymous (question):

It's basically from a combination of Molly getting serum injections and being brainwashed and hypnotized into acting like a chicken. I'll go into more detail about this in a future sequel ...

What did you think of the story overall, by the way?

It's a hypnosis story for sure, and not badly written. However, there's nothing remotely erotic about it. Even the scat play and foot worship dont lead to anything erotic. Not that I'm into that stuff. Just don't get the point of putting this on an erotic story website.

@Anonymous (Huh?):

Perhaps the erotic elements are downplayed, but I still think that I put in enough erotic material to warrant publication on this site.

I want to make sure that my erotic stories are about sex, but also character and plot. That way, readers get as well-rounded a product as possible.

@Anonymous (Donna):

I've finally gotten around to writing a chapter with Donna the monkey-girl as the main character. Hope you like it!

You can read "Pet Teachers 3: Submissive Simian" here:

https://www.literotica.com/s/pet-teachers-ch-03-submissive-simian