All Comments on 'Petra's Tale Pt. 01'

this was a good story, and I am sure it will be a good series as well

...our wonderful Wizard(ess) of Oz is back with another great story with a suitable cliff-hanger at the end (designed to leave us panting for more, I suspect). Couple of things in this made me chuckle out loud. One was the drinking a yard of ale while standing on one's head (and that's why Aussies elected their PM). It reminded me of the German glass boot which, unless held the right way, deposits a litre or so of beer on the drinker's head. The other was the second boyfriend called Gary: this made me think of the Monty Python sketch in which all Aussie men are called Bruce. Thanks for an entertaining start to my Saturday, Shaima.

Another beautiful beginning to a wonderful story by a very talented writer. I really love reading your stories and am very thankful you post them for everyone to enjoy. Thank you from a very gracious reader.

Your stories are always gripping and relatable, brilliant as expected!

So delightful, so descriptive, so true-to-life, so imaginative. No surprise, coming from the author of "The American Reporter," which is one of the best stories ever posted on this site.