All Comments on 'The Petworthy Finishing School'

I would be anxious to hear comments from readers about what appeals to them about Petworthy. I will be writing much more as I go forward. As an erotic novel goes, this will be lengthy as was its predecessors in the early 1900s

Your rhythm is good, but it is the fact that she is told by one authority figure (her dad) to obey the headmistress and with him and daughter having NO idea of the nasty things the headmistress is going to do to the girl add that to the shock of the innocent girl. Love that theme.also if she is made to do things in front of others later on, the shame or humiliation, of making her spread herself and pleading plesse no in front of them.

Does that help?

Ohhh this is lovely.