All Comments on 'Pharaoh’s Curse Pt. 01'

It's 5am I was riveted to this story, I absolutely loved the storytelling and the build up to the sex. I can see this being another one of your epic tales and I can't wait for the next part. Thank you.

So far not much of a curse. Please continue.

I really appreciate your style and pacing. Thanks!!!

More please.

Please continue, this is great !

...I'm blown away by your writing. This promises to be yet another amazing story.

I can't wait for the next installment.

Wow what a great start. I am looking forward to the next part of your story & keep up the good work.

Actually the first time I’ve read a story with an other worldly theme besides straight up incest. I actually enjoyed the read, would be nice to see where it goes from here.

I must say that this is a truly amazing start to this story! So original and the details are magical! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Glad you allowed anon comments. This is an awesome start. What a way to weave fantasy and wicked hot monkey sex together! I'm sure he will nail the stepmom and hopefully get them both together. I do so enjoy women eating pussy. Again, what a tale. Bring on more.

Jedd

It's been a while since I read sure a wonderful story!!! Can't wait for more. The wait would kill me. Expecting the sequel soon

A great tale of fantasy encompassing two of my many favored interests. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Sequel please that was the best story I read on here easily my favorite by far

i swear soul every time i read one of your awesome it turns into a history lesson learning about your character names but love the story can't wait for part 2

That I want the cat???? 😁😈😏

Your best work yet! Please continue your other works and I look forward to seeing how this tale unfolds!😀👍

An amazing read! I hope that you will be continuing this story, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I was all set to give this 5 stars when it got a little muddled after his first time with Alex. The jump from mother and son to the egyptian gods as soon as the page started took me out of out o the story just enough to drop it to 4 stars,

All in all excellent work

Because I have to wait for the next part! Really good read. I'm not an archeologist or a writer but can say as a layman I enjoyed this immensely and look forward to reading more parts! Nice work!

A couple of writing errors but definitely worth the read. I cannot wait for the next chapter. 5 stars. Thank you.

Great start to a new series can't wait to see where the series goes

The rating was very good but the start of the story felt super rushed. Alex left her son when he was 10 and apparently hasn't sent a letter or called for 7 years. I felt like the whole forgiveness thing should have taken longer than one day.

Brilliant can't wait to be able to read more, worth more than just five stars.

But you need to proof read it to pick up all the wrong words used. Little things make a difference, like brush instead of bush.

Please write another chapter. 5*.

Another great story, can't wait to see where it goes!

Really great story, can't wait to see what happens!

Keep up the good work!

Really enjoyable first part looking forward to Future updates.

What an awesome story I can’t wait for part 2.

I hope you I'll be reading the next part of the story soon cause I am hooked...

I desperately want to read more of this.

P lease, as soon as you can.

And just as long. I love a good long read.

Excellent story, can't wait for the next part.

Second time reading this story, can you please continue this one please.

I hope you continue this story! I really want to read what happens next!

Really love the story all around!

hope that Pt.2 will come out

This is a good story. Waiting for the next chapter. When is this likely to be?

A little Indiana Jones mixed with Tomb of the mummy, a dash of Oedipus, and a healthy serving of penis worship. More please ???

Can’t wait for the next chapters

Pls more

holy shit where did you pull out that story? I am honestly more interested in everything else than the mom/son sex. as wicked62 said sex scenes are all over the place.

yet you somehow managed to keep the story itself without the taboo sex very interesting.

I especially like the scenes with Bast and the Egyptian story.

really looking forward to reading pt2 now. 5* Stars so far

Well paced story to go for 9 pages. Kept my interest all the way through.

Good background to set the story against.

Well done.

18 and can't stay at Home by himself, man...

This is amazing, the erotica of it is good, but the story itself? EPIC!!!

The creativity of this story alone deserves 5 stars but adding it the character development and sex scenes puts it over the top. It feels like the story gripped the author and then found its way onto "paper". I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great story, loving it so far.

Scores 5/5

Got to say, I love this story.

Just started this one - great stuff so far...5*

What? He gave up all those gold and riches to the egyptian museam/government without getting anything in return???

"No, even then you wouldn't be that interesting," Wow after 8 years she treats her son like that? I wonder if there is a reason shes treating him like trash she just picked up.

"I am sorry, Andrew. I know how angry you are with me. But I had to follow my dream. I hope you can come to understand that someday," Alex whispered. “ couldnt she said that when she met him for the first time instead of berating him and apologizing while he is asleep? Maybe a hug at how she missed him for 8 years?

Also why was she sleeping naked lol the first night and every night afterwards? Suddenly after they woke up theyre best friends.

It wasn't like he had these thoughts beforehand, so why now? Because he never saw her for 8 years.. its weird how they never talk about how hes been these 8 years or how his father is etc. Like she just doesn’t care?

“Alex asked, while she worried about if he was injured or not. She still wanted to get a firsthand account of what he saw.” Lol ok career wayyyyyyy above sons health here lol.

Her right eye winked at him as the entirety of his length rested in her mouth. First blowjob in 8 years with a size she never had before and instant deepthroat expert? After the blowjob he didnt say a thing? He didnt talk to her why she did that? Also before and during and after the Anta scene he didnt say a sentence.. is he just a zombie/dildo with no character during sex?

It doesnt seem he was happy with his blessings after Bast told him about them? I would happy with joy lol.

Also he and his mom did not discuss that video and his behavior etc?

At long last, a soul71 story where the son isn’t quite as big a wimp! 5 stars, even though some of the writing is rough, I mean really, Alex gets on the bed on her hands and knees, then turns over so her son can take her from behind, wth…

It’s a story and needs to move forward. Wish he would stay with mom. He just found the huge treasure and tomb but he leaves. Still pretty good though. Wish been little more emotion about leaving his mom now that he spent time with her

When I saw the title and theme I reminded me of moon knight considering Im in the middle of the series.

One technical comment, unless the phone Andrew used when he arrived at the dig site was a satellite phone his cell phone would have not worked (no service) as somehow I doubt that there was an array of cell towers out in the desert (I never saw any when I was in the Middle East). It would be possible for him to be on FB IF that dig site had satellite internet, they had a wireless router connected to it and he was given what was necessary to connect to it. If there is a satellite internet then it would be possible to have VOIP (Voice Over Internet Protocol) available but not using his phone setup as a cell phone as his existing phone number would not have of worked and he would have needed a VOIP app installed.

OMG, this is a fucking fantastic story. I can't wait to continue. If there are spelling, grammar or any other mistakes, I don't give a shit. Soul71 you are a phenomenal writer, I can't get enough of your brilliance.

Damn dude you got skill!

Excellent! Written by the best Author here of course and my Favorite Author! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE GIGANTIC GASIOUS FLAMING NOVA STARS about to explode! Can't beat that score, lol. Thanks Soul71, it was a pleasure,

so love this dang story.... I had to start reading it again for the 3rd time

That was Great! Thank you.

Soul71, you write amazing stories, and this one is a masterpiece. This one does not deserve to be in Literotica. This should have been a mainstream adventure novel. 500 stars!!! Looking forward to the next chapters.

This has just been awesome ! Such a great and hot read.