All Comments on 'Phoenix'

Lovely story!

5

Beautiful. Thank you.

5 Stars.

Good story but rushed. Slow down and it would be excellent.

Entertaining and sweet but they moved too quickly from meeting to marriage for me to fully buy into the premise. Ethan's "visit" helped, but still too much too fast. 4.1*

A very nice well written story.

A sad and lovely story.

You need to read aloud your words so as to hear the need for editing.

Many words ending with an s when it should have been ed.

The bane of computerised typing.

3*

Very nice story, thanks for sharing. Just one small correction, if I may. The Marine Corps does not have ‘medics’. They have Navy Corpsmen trained in battlefield medicine to serve with Marines. Since the Marine Corps is part of the Navy, the Navy supplies all the necessary medical services needed to the Marines. Prevents “duplication of services”.

Thanks again for the story.

Excellent, thank you