by Bakeboss
How much longer must we all be exposed to your writing these abbreviated stories just so that you can win $500? I'll give you a thousand dollars, if you promise not to write another story. You suck as a writer.
After all the stories you have submitted and only getting one big red H - non-erotic I think - it seems you would finally give it up. As Ben Hogan once said to a golfer during a lesson - take two weeks off and then quit for good. Please heed that advice and quit torturing us who occasionally forget how poor your writing is and waste our time reading your submissions.
When I was having internet problems, all the phone repairman did was replace my wireless modem. I feel very cheated! :->