All Comments on 'Phoner'

Your story is quite different from what one usually finds on this site. The change is appreciated.

I'd like to see a continuation of these deliberate displays of discreet pleasure.

Sometimes the hottest sex is the sex you can't actually have. Well-written and miles above the crude stroke tales so common on any story site. Only thing I would have liked was a few more clues as to what work she was doing. Just why was she the only women among so many men? I would guess military but I'm not sure. What did cross my mind being a gay author is that the story would have worked as well with a male protagonist <g>. Best, Ken

I love your style. Clean and fun, teasing and provocative without lots of nasty, raunchy stranger sex. I am enjoying many of your stories!