All Comments on 'Phones Ch. 02 - Catching Mom'

It finished just as it started to get interesting. I actually like your writing style, but you have to write a longer chapter to get a good rating. Two stars from me as I wish I hadn't wasted my time.

It appears no one is offended by the videos, which is a positive sign.

Part one might have been better without the opening reveal, but based on the category it wasn't unexpected.

Part two was a bit short, but the old line is "leave them wanting more", which is fine with me.

Way better than chapter 1. How far are you planning on this going?

I thinks it's thirteen chapters, all of them in the censors hands, waiting to be posted.

getting good, part 3 should be pay off. thanks.