All Comments on 'Phones Ch. 03 - Molly Finds Out'

The story it's self is great so far. Would be nice though if maybe the chapters were a little longer or had a little more in them. Gave 5 star because I'm hoping the story continues to grow and develop

It's good. But these chapters are way too short

story is progressing great but would be nice if the chapters were a little longer or maybe had a little more in them. gave you a 5 star because like i said its a good story and i think it will progress into an even better one at that. good job m8

Your style is great but the chapters are TOO short.

Great progression of story. Can't wait for more.

I agree with the other comments. Great story, but too short on the individual details. Family incest combined with Swinging parents, can make for a fantastic story. Please continue.

I'm new here. All the parts of this are in. Next story, longer chapters.

I'd give you 5 stars but your chapters are way too short. If this continues I'm giving up on them.

Cannot wait for next chapter. Hope it starts to unfold more.

I'm new here and did not know how many words on a "page" when the story is posted. I aimed for 2K words. Next story (This one, all 13 parts, is already in the censors hands.) I'll have longer chapters or just post the whole story at once.

Great start. Keep them coming.

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