All Comments on 'Photo Foreplay Ch. 01'

You did a great job in setting up the story. Now I just can't wait to see where it goes!

The story concept was great the only downfall was all the bad spelling mistakes and grammar errors. Please re-read for the next episode.

Thank you all for your comment. I have enlisted the aid of an editor and with his help I will clean up all of my stories and repost them. I know it will make reading them more enjoyable.

88, as I read, I tried to figure ou4 the transgender part of this story. I knew I was reading this for the transgender, cross dresser part. I could not figure it out until she stepped out of the shower and he was distracted by her cock. I fear what the result will be of his comment: you are a guy...? I am with another reader who commented - I cannot wait to see what is next. I am ready - 88, use Mia and seduce me ♡ ! ♡ ! ♡

88,

You know what makes No a so hot and sexy. Jason is a photographer - mostly, or exclusively women. He KNOWS a beautiful, sensuous women. And, for a long time he has been watching this "woman". The different outfits, and the make-up ...a blow job and he thinks No a is a woman. She is good. I love a man who makes himself to genuinely look like a woman. Damn, she is hot!!!

One other observation: your story still needs some editing.

awesome and to all the correctness freaks ----get a life and give 88 a break. I would love to post a couple stories but the incidents of some activities I participated in would cause me lose concentration.

** your stories were logical enough to understand. its too bad we have so many "editors" and English readers.

Again great story and you've got a fan in Texas