All Comments on 'Photo Opportunity'

I really enjoyed your build up to this story the family learning and seeing each other's bodies but after Chapter 14 things were beginning to get confusing. Your talking about Paul/Paula having a chat and recreating the poses then you state MUM...

Also you brought the brother sister together for sex would have liked to see that drawn out to another story. Maybe hired but a client for the photographer to take more sexual pictures/film for lots of cash. But it was worth 4 stars. Thanks

Chapter 14

Husband-Wife Chat

Paul steps in front of Paula. The female-behind-male rendition. His back grazes against Paula's front. He presses back against her. Paula is stunned and immobilized. She doesn't know what to do.

"Mum, we can start the pose now."

The reference to “Mum” in the husband-wife sex is an allusion

to the husband (Paul) role-playing their son (Michael).

I suppose that didn’t come out right in the way I rendered it...

A very erotic story. I love the believable realistic characters, particularly the mature mom, the buildup, the way the family members slowly discover each other.

Pls tell me there is a Ch2 to this. The story already alludes to sibling sex, and the hubby/wife roleplaying bro/sis intimacy, hoping that you will bring it to the next level of

possibilities, of dad/daughter, mom/son and the delicious prospect of a 3 or 4some. Pls dont disappoint.

I liked the way the story moved forward from one set of poses to the next. Slowly stripping away their inhibitions led the family to new insights and opened them to new feelings, insights and emotions.

As for chapter 14 - it was clearly a role play situation to prepare one or the other, or both of them, for the next set of more intimate poses.

Very well written!!

very good theme and well written indeed. hope to see more from the writer.........

So very erotic! 5 stars.