by werewoman
it is time to end this story steve needs to be beaten so that danny and his mom can get on with there lives
And she cant figure out how to leave an abusive marriage
How fucking unbelievable is that
If she cant figure out how to leave an abusive relationship,, I sure as fuck would never want her representing me
disagree about " it needs to end". first this is a romance not a S&F between mom and son. He tried the pure seduction way and yes in a very long run I am sure it would have made it there. But he would be no good for it and SHE would be one hundred percent ruined.
So by running a more natural progression so far you will actually get to the part you want the most even faster and you wont have a story ending with two ruined people. More over people who are supposed to at least have some level of love and now can't have that. Doesn't sound erotic to me, please werewoman continue this beautiful adventure on the pace you feel fits your "characters".
Not a bad story as far as romance goes, but I've have known a number of female attorneys, both as prosecutors and defenders, and I've never met one that would go along with the bullshit this husband is handing out.