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Click hereEventually my cock softened and slid out of her pussy, Pam pulled her mouth away from me and said, time to go inside, you leave at 8am in the morning, so you've got another 12 hours to fuck me.
In the meantime, let my send the pics to my husband so he's aware of what I'm doing!
- COMMENTS
gordo12about 7 years agoYour mistakes are obvious and I can't help but think you write but don't check what you write.
One way or another, you need to get an editor or take more care. I couldn't finish the story 2*
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYes a few errors, name change to Eve near the end as an example but still damn hot. Thanks for the story.
Anonymousabout 7 years ago.............. and you need to read it through, very carefully, to edit out errors.
Roggeringabout 7 years agoAuthorMy first story,apologies for the naming mistakes towards the end. Wrote it for a friend who asked for the name change, obviously made a mess!
Sorry
