All Comments on 'Photoshop Omega: The Wizard'

MORE MORE MORE. It was so much cool. Suspience trill and satisfaction. Thank you.

So this is what's reflected in my comment.

Great story. I do not usually go for the trans gender ones, but this was good.

I do hope there's more, but I am satisfied with what is here.

Excellent job, and ask that you write plenty more, either of this or other tales you can think up.

ES

Though it's not what I expected when I started reading it on chapter 1, this three-parter was a really good read.For all that happened, I think this chapter brings it to a pretty satisfying close. That said, I would like to know what happens to everyone after the fact. Something like an epilog would be nice. I think there might be room for one more chapter if you wanted to get the father involved, but short of knowing how the characters live from now on, I think I like it as it is. Thank you for your hard work making stories for us perverts out there blkngry.

Between the body changes and the dramatic tension of Sharon/Chantel trying to fuck him over and his sweet, sweet revenge... And then Alaina to cap it off

Just beautiful...

Seriously that was great.

Honestly, I loved every part of it! And this chapter is the most perfect ending I've ever read on here (though I hope you give us some kind epilogue to tell us what happened to Chantel and Shari, maybe a look at Jake and Alaina's new relationship, and maybe something nice for dear ol' dad?). Again, this has to be my most favorite story on here and you wrote it beautifully!

I hope there are some follow-ups on their role-play.

There so needs to be more!

...for the Pete of Sake, PLEASE proofread before submitting! Jeez, did you write the whole thing in speech-to-text or something? If it weren't so captivating, and well-written, and HOT right from the beginning, I would have clicked away, the composition errors were so frustrating. Also, BREATH is something you take; BREATHE is something you do.

...sorry to be so down. Did you catch that it was captivating and well-written and HOT right from the beginning? Because it was, in spades.

OMFG ~ that was a fun ROMP.

Not too nerdy, or too over-explainey of the 'magic'... just moving the story along with good highs and modest rests in between. It moved fast enough to gloss over "huh?" that might occur to a more discerning reader (giggle-snort), and kept me wanting to see what happened next.

This one makes my list of must-read-again.

Thanks !

Great twist with the alliance with Alaina

Please continue with him moving in with her. Just thinking of the people and creatures he could create is such a turn on.

Jake discovers a program add-on that affects the personality of the subject.

He changes Chantel into a genuinely nice person who finds work as a stripper.

He changes Shari the same way.

Shari eventually gets Chantel pregnant.

This is too over the top for me. I thought the first installment was much better.

Please make sure he keeps fucking Chantelle & Sharon so this stays in the incest/taboo category.

I love your work as always, 5*

You've speller Chantell with a 'S' once, and changed the Pov from First person to third person when Jake meets Alaina.

Any chance of more chapters?

Kooky! Inventive! Although not really my bag of tea. Some very amusing turns of phrase! Double-check spelling; bit of a bugaboo for some readers (hand raised).