All Comments on 'Pick Up'

You have a keen understanding of what turns people on, Fantastic. I loved all of this story from start to finish. His commanding words, your blow-job. Your discriptions are great. thanks for a great story.

THAT was AMAZING! i am completely lost for words, this is how fantasy goes! 500 gold stars for you :)

Thank you

This story is sensuous, erotic and well written. Keep the stories coming!

Great plot, excellent writing. Editing was well done as well. A few of the type of typos that inevitably sneak into my stories; but nothing glaring that yanked me out of the moment. Looking forward to reading more!.

Some corny dialogue, but still entertaining, and definitely hot. We should all be so lucky to have a full night of ecstasy such as this.

That was one of the most riveting and enjoyable stories I have read in a long while. Either you have one hell of an imagination, or are a wonderfully fortunate soul having experienced a serendipitous night the likes of which most of humankind merely dreams of having! Bravo, in either case!!

Oh shit. I want you. Your mind, the way you write and if this is really your fantasy then I'm so much more turned on by you right now. What is your name? Sam? Beth? damn!!!

So...what if we do a reverse on this story!

I'll turn my back to you...

Okay, I'm ready!

Well done girl! Hot and believable. And now if you’ll excuse me, the game is about to start and I’m going to go try and put into practice what you just taught me…