- Romance
- Pick You Up
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Click hereCaroline kissed my cheek, told us both she loved us, before she left me alone with my daughter. She smiled at me again before looping her arm through mine, feeling her kiss my cheek too.
"Come on, kiddo. Let's get you hitched."
As we walked towards the doors leading into the church, my daughter wanting all the bells and whistles for her ceremony, I had to stop and take one last look at her. After a last hug, she whispered, "You know, Daddy, I had the best teachers when it came to making a marriage work. I'm going to take the lessons from you and Mum and make sure Brad and I have the same sort of marriage."
"I'm just glad I didn't screw up raising all of you. I know the divorce wasn't easy on any of us when you were younger."
"You were the best, Daddy, and you made the best decision for all of us. I haven't thought about that woman in a long time. She made her decision. But what made your divorce even better was when you met Mum. I love her so much."
"And she loves you just as much. She didn't carry you, but she's always considered you, Alice and Cindy as her own, much as I think the same of James and Melissa."
She took a deep breath and hook her arm around mine again. "Let's get me married, Daddy."
The doors ahead opened, the music started to play, and I led my oldest daughter slowly down the aisle. The entire way, Caroline's eyes never left mine, and to be honest, I never looked away from her. I immediately had the idea that we could renew our vows and enjoy a second honeymoon.
Certainly something to discuss in our hotel room later that night.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoA really good story. Thoroughly enjoyable with just the right amount of kleenex at the end.
JimDiamond5 months agoGreat story. Gave it a five. Only one real problem. NEVER, EVER fire a black shell from a real firearm into someone. It WILL kill them. Especially if fired into the head. Not just burn hair and scalp! Unfortunately, movies have made people think it is safe. One Hollywood actor actually blew his brains out with a blank in a pistol when playing around and thinking it would only make noise. If he had actually fired that blank into the creatures head it would have blown up.
Anonymous7 months agoThat opening reminiscing scene, christ, that's haunting stuff. Hard to believe people can do that to people they supposedly care about. To beat a women to within an inch of her life, and then abuse your own children... I'm surprised he let that monster live. No wonder he quit. Seeing stuff like that is just too much for most men.
Honestly he shouldn't have let that scumbag live at the end. His next victim certainly won't thank him for it (and yes there will almost certainly be one with people like this because people like him cannot change their nature). He should have just ended the problem permanently right there. But you can't do that - that's murder! Yes, it is. You can label it however you wish. But sometimes a choice has to be made whether to let an uncaring monster like that live and risk potentially harming god knows how many people, or just do the sensible thing and end it. I know which choice I would make and I wouldn't lose any sleep over it.
"We'd long agreed that we'd try anything except introducing other people. We loved each other far too much to even contemplate doing such a thing." This right here is something so many authors should bear in mind when writing any kind of romance story, especially the incest-based ones as the connection in those is often far deeper and thus makes even less sense when sharing happens.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThe point is marking justice yourself is not good but this is true this kind of situation is hard to deal with. This story will certainly help many ladies that have met bad guys. There is hope. Just need to see it when in the darkness.
1948Boomer8491over 1 year agoFantastic story, anticipated the confrontation with Jack and happily, he wasn’t killed. But, discharging a blank shell near the back of the head would result in burnt hair and burnt and broken scalp at a minimum. The force could knock a person unconscious and even cause a concussion. At worst it could cause death even though there is no bullet. The force of the blast certainly would knock the person down or as you wrote, into the grave but the result most likely would have prevented Jack from carrying on a conversation or spend three days hiking back to civilization.
dirtyoldbimanover 1 year agoheart warming story but several plot errors not really worth mentioning. thanks for writing this
