All Comments on 'Picking Up the Pieces'

Is there going to be a 2nd chapter? This story was so sad. I feel sorry for both Jax and Peter.

It would certainly put a crimp in a guy's love life. Poor Jackson.

I hope there's going to be more. You left it off at a terribly sad and unsettled place. My heart aches for both of them, but it does explain a lot.

There will be more! Thank you for reading :)

I am so hooked , it is so sad for Peter to be so close to the one he loves and can't touch him because Jax thinks he is covered in germs , such a sad story.....chap. 2 soon PLZE

lost intrest

I'm hooked, but you need to learn the difference between, YOUR and YOU'RE, you were using YOUR all the time, when some some should have been YOU'RE, for YOU ARE.

Thank you for all the encouragements! They really mean a lot, I know I have a lot of work to do, especially on editing- I'm so embarrassed I mixed up your and you're, I hate that! I will definately work on it. But really thank you, your comments really mean a lot to me.

I loved the way you described Jax and it was a total surprise to get to know that he has psychological problems. However, I hope there will be a steady relationship between him and Peter, so please post soon and keep up the good work.