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Origin40Origin40almost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you to my readers

I hope you enjoyed what happened with Susan and Jennifer. Please feel free to leave comments or feedback if you have any.

Thank you,

Origin

ramblin2020ramblin2020over 3 years ago

I loved the Jenn and Susan part of the two stories. I thought the principal was creepy and rapy though and felt it clashed with everything else going on, but maybe that was the pathos you were going for? In any event, 5 stars and I think you have a great ability to write. Even the football game section was detailed and made sense. I love the attention to detail.

Origin40Origin40almost 2 years agoAuthor

This remains my highest rated story. I know my usual tales involve control (or lack of it), so I enjoy that this one about two friends finding each other is the most appreciated. Thanks to everyone!

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I put words to page. This is a hobby, a diversion. Every once in a while a little story or scenario makes it's way into my mind. After it gets refined and reworked, eventually it makes it's way here. Sometimes fantasies of control. Sometimes the joy of coming together. Hopefu...