All Comments on 'Picking up the Pieces Ch. 01'

wow, this was a great story. yea, i guess there could have been grammar errors or whatever, but if there were, they didnt take anything away from the story. im really interested to see where this goes in the following chapters. keep up the good work.

You can be sure I'll be back for seconds. And thirds, fourths, too.

<u> <b> <i> Good job!

All the elements of a nice romance. Well written and well characterized.