All Comments on 'Pickup Pt. 02'

by RalphyNJ

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Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar08over 2 years ago

I absolutely love this story. would love to read more of your work.

Dpj49Dpj49over 2 years ago

What a sweet, sweet story. I loved it. I think we need more sweet love stories we can fantasize with. Thank you for the smile on my face!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was a good read. I really enjoyed it! Very heart felt with a meaning.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A delightful love story which I totally enjoyed

Such a contrast to the sterile sex stories prevalent these days - this had a good, if not flawless, storyline with finely etched characters that behaved in a believable way.

Thank you RalphyNJ for top quality writing and I hope you are inspired to post more in the future.

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