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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 2 years ago

Loved the gradual built-up from playful/funny to serious/about-to-get-caught, intense!

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Charli Mac is an Erotic Romance writer who loves sci-fi and Fantasy, but who also dabbles in BDSM short stories.