by javawarrior
Loved the climactic ending. Laughed at the twisted ending too. Great read
Interesting premise. Well and beautifully described. Thank you.
I appreciate the feedback and everyone who's favorited. This was my first try with this category, and I had fun writing it.
not sure how it fits Nude Day theme, but excellent build up, definitely both exhibitionism and voyeur to the max.
If you'll kindly tell me where the hell this world is, I'll be off immediately! Just... Damn! The suspense was killing me, and then that ending! Hell yeah! And dude who criticized about the Nude Day Theme... did you miss all the public nudity?
Sorry; lost me when White changed to What'shername. A thing like that needs continuity!
Good premise.
But somewhat confusing.
Sure would have liked her exploring/touching his cock and balls once they were on the bed. Do you like it when I....? Should I do it more? Faster? Slower? Harder? Softer?
What do you like about my body? What would you like to do to me? What would you like me to do to /for you?
What's her sexual background, if any? What experience has she had with cocks and balls? Has she ever masturbated a man, or is it just in her head?
Four stars.