All Comments on 'Pinch Hitter'

your stories just keep getting better and better, the way you build up your stories is nothing short of amazing, you are a very talented writer, and one of the few writers who's stories I can read without skipping anything, keep it up

I look forward to your great stories. Keep them coming.

I look for your stories every time that I am on line. They are always a wonderful read.

Please keep them coming.

As usual, I really enjoyed reading this story! thank you so much for sharing it with us!

A really cool story. I enjoyed it immensely especially since I'm no stranger to twin trickery, as is the case here. However, I applaude May's character for being open to new experiences and for coming clean in the end. I hope we see more of her and Iris.

Thank you for removing the deception at the end, to allow it to remain would have tainted the story in my humble opinion. Cheers for another good read.

Sweet bubbling brown sugar! Hot sex, hot bodies, wonderful!

All the best,

Kathy

Again I like your style of writing..AL