All Comments on 'Pinch Hitter Mom Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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Kelly should come back unexpectedly and join them. And we find out Mom has already seduced Kelly and they set this up. Five

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Escalated too quickly.

You 'liked' six pictures on my social media, you must've jerked off to them. Who makes that kind of leap about their son?

Skipped too much of the act itself.

Could've had mom find out by overhearing a Skype with the wife while they thought she was napping.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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I see a FaceTime mishap and a new open mom and slut daughter team cuming :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 3 years ago

I loved the start. Wished it was longer. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Will mom be sucking him off when he face times his wife? Five stars and a favorite point!

ekim22ekim22about 3 years ago
Build up was great, then got rushed

The buildup was awesome....coulda used a bit more seduction, awkwardness, maybe some sneak peaks....not just mom going all-in.

But well written.

TabooTales1TabooTales1about 3 years ago
Have to agree with others

The build-up was going so well, but then it went far too fast. It's a fun premise and as a baseball fan, I'm loving all of the references there so allow me to give one back. You were down 5-0 and instead of trying to get on base and get a rally going, you tried to rush back with a five-run homer. Sometimes, you just need a table setter to get us to the big knock. Still well-written, but would have been five stars without the rushed ending.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 3 years ago

Rather than her moith he needs to fill her cunt with his cum

Lee2012Lee2012about 3 years ago

A little more than just one more foreplay. BJ should have gone further. To quick of an ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Tried to get my mom after my first wife left me for a black man but she wouldn't give in to me. Tried again after my second marriage when she turned 60 but still no such luck. Too bad I didn't walk in on her while still living at home as I spied on her.

rooster11055rooster11055almost 3 years ago

Great story. I've had similar fantasies about my mom. Thanks for fueling that fire.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 3 years ago

WARNING!!! This is a cock tease story!!

phantom2554phantom2554over 2 years ago

Chapter 2?!!!? Please

rjsully7rjsully7over 2 years ago

Very 🔥Chapter 2?!!!? Please, Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Seven more innings, baby! Unless they’re tied.

Hopefully he hits one out of the park!

Marvin

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien42011 months ago

Great story. Thanks for sharing

mizzouguy88mizzouguy882 months ago

Really enjoyed it. Moved quickly and seductively. Can't wait for part 2 when the wife calls.

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Haven't felt so much of the writing bug of late, but you'll see me hanging out in the Lit Chat fairly frequently; always happy to chat or RP. I love being a good boy for Mommy. I'm very unlikely to initiate a conversation but I promise I'm very approachable! All of my stori...